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nainsandeep
June 26th, 2003, 01:43 PM
maine bhi sajaaya tha sapnon ka ik nagar ....
sheeshe ki diwaarein thi jiski magar ...
todd daala zamaane ke sitam ne jise ...
sochtaa hun iskaa dosh ab doon main kise...
zamaane ko jisne mann behalaane ke liye tha ise dhaya...
ya khud ko ki aisaa nagar hi tha kyon galati se banaya...

nain's
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After reading all the posted shayari stuff i cudn't stop my self writing and came up up with this...
if i have made any mistake i hope u ppl will rectify that and help me in improving...

uday
June 26th, 2003, 02:40 PM
bahut hi badhiya... keep it up !!

yvsgaawar
June 26th, 2003, 06:56 PM
Wah bhai Wah...

akdabas
June 26th, 2003, 07:14 PM
Wah wah wah wah wah wah..............................................

rinu
June 26th, 2003, 08:10 PM
KoOl......




RiNu

nainsandeep
June 27th, 2003, 02:17 PM
Thanx for appreciation.......

aki2005
June 27th, 2003, 08:45 PM
nice...

sheoran007
June 27th, 2003, 08:46 PM
vah bai vah bahut badiya

nainsandeep
June 28th, 2003, 01:31 PM
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khwaab aur haqiqat ke beech badh rahe hain faasale
chahta hun kuch ho rahaa kuch aur hai.....

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manas
June 29th, 2003, 10:24 AM
Nain Bhai,



Achha Likhte Ho................