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nmalik121
June 18th, 2007, 10:38 AM
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I Love You




I Love You
With my every breath,
With all I have left,
From the deepest depths,
Of my heart, I love you.


With all of my strength,
With a thousand miles' length,
Every thought I think,
I think that I love you.


For the length of forever,
As long as we're together,
Through good and bad weather,
For always, I love you.



When no one is there,
When you think no one cares,
When love seems too rare,
Remember, I love you.


When everything's gone,
When all has withdrawn,
When hopelessness dawns,
Don't forget, I love you.


When you fall down,
When your dreams come unwound,
When hope can't be found,
Be happy, I love you.


When you make mistakes,
When you're filled with hate,
When you're old and gray,
Even then, I'll love you.


Even death don't do us part..
Separation don't come our way..
Even in the other world,
We will be together...
I will always love you..... now and forever !

bls31
June 30th, 2007, 10:52 AM
From the sketch it appears the that the Love Cry is from the damsel in distress BLS

vijay
July 8th, 2007, 05:38 PM
Hi Nitin,

Very nice poem !

Is that your own composition ? :)

sunitahooda
July 9th, 2007, 11:44 AM
Nitin couldn't stop to put my thoughts in shape of words for most beautiful feeling called LOVE-
I don’t care if it’s said or just felt
As Love is a feeling no one can fake
Whether I love or be loved
God sends me love of my own share

The flame of love will keep burning
Glows with its crowning glory
It holds its worth with breath we take
Warmth is radiant and enchanting

When Feelings turn into ashes of words
Dreams floating and yet to be visualized
Those eyes closed in name of love
Emotions are realized and this feeling is LOVE

VirenderNarwal
July 9th, 2007, 12:43 PM
या अबला ते बेचारी लज्जा मे खुद शरम शार हुए बैठी है.......इब घनी न कहो मलिक सहाब ने......ऐसा ना हो जाये के घने दबाव में ये भी...सलमान खान की तरह.....कुर्ता....पजामा.....?

अगर हम इस विशय को छोड दे..के ये जाटलैंड पर देनी चाहिये थी या नही......तो
आपकी कविता बहुत उत्तम से भाई जी.....और पैंटिग................?

nmalik121
July 9th, 2007, 05:42 PM
Woww Sunita....Loved your beauitiful expression of words for the most beautiful concept on earth called "LOVE." Why dont u write often...would love it more with betetr rhyme....keep it up dear.:)


Nitin couldn't stop to put my thoughts in shape of words for most beautiful feeling called LOVE-
I don’t care if it’s said or just felt
As Love is a feeling no one can fake
Whether I love or be loved
God sends me love of my own share

The flame of love will keep burning
Glows with its crowning glory
It holds its worth with breath we take
Warmth is radiant and enchanting

When Feelings turn into ashes of words
Dreams floating and yet to be visualized
Those eyes closed in name of love
Emotions are realized and this feeling is LOVE

vijay
July 9th, 2007, 06:58 PM
Nitin,

You didn't answered my query. :)
Is that your own composition ?

nmalik121
July 9th, 2007, 09:22 PM
:)No dear...let me tell you that this one and the another one titled "Kiss of Death" are not mine....Rest of the poems/posts are compeletly mine and I don't have any hesitation in telling this fact....Hope you got your answer..and yes..u can ask me same question even for my other posts or future creations....Keep visiting...keep commenting...:)

vijay
July 9th, 2007, 09:29 PM
No Dear, i just asked because i have read it before somewhere else :)
No offence, keep posting !

poonam
July 10th, 2007, 04:50 AM
Is that your own composition ? :)

Nope its mine..:D;) hehehe...

Well nice picture...I wonder who painted it..