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vijay
March 16th, 2009, 10:52 PM
मुझे मत मारो
( एक कन्या भ्रूण की पुकार )

मैं कुदरत का वरदान, वस्तु नहीं बेकार की
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

माँ, आप खुद भी तो एक नारी हो
किसलिये मेरी बलि को तैयार हुई ।
ममता की वो जीती जागती मूरत
कैसे इस महापाप में भागीदार हुई ।
मुझे अपनाओ, मुझे तो जरुरत है दुलार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

पिताजी, क्या दूध का कर्ज़ भूल गये
आपको भी जन्म दिया एक नारी ने ।
अपने दिल के टुकडे को मार डालोगे
इतना वहशी बनाया किस लाचारी ने ।
मुझे स्वीकारो, मैं मूरत आपके संस्कार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

डॉक्टर जी, आप तो रहम कीजिये
आपको तो जीवनदाता कहा जाता है ।
एक लाचार व मासूम को मारते हुए
क्या आपको भी दर्द नहीं आता है ।
मुझे जीने दो, मैं तो रचना हूँ पालनहार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

वकील जी, आप न्याय के पहरेदार
अनेक बेगुनाहों को रोज़ बचाते हो ।
कितना अन्याय हो रहा मेरे साथ
फ़िर आप किसलिये मुँह छिपाते हो ।
मुझे बचाओ, सजा करवाओ गुनाहगार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

पुलिस जी, आप जनता के रखवाले
क्या मैं जनता में गिनी नहीं जाती ।
किसलिये खामोश है आपका डंडा
क्यों मेरी चीत्कार सुनी नहीं जाती ।
रक्षा कीजिये एक बेजुबान और लाचार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

सब चुपचाप देख रहे हैं मेरी हत्या
मुझे बचाने कोई क्यों नहीं भागता ।
एक मासूम बच्ची की पुकार सुनके
क्या किसी का जमीर नहीं जागता ।
रोक दो आज से रिवाज ये अत्याचार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

प्रक्रति के बनाये नियम मत तोडो
नारी के बिना ये जीवन अधूरा है ।
जरा अपने आप से पूछ कर देखो
कौन-सा नर, नारी के बिना पूरा है ।
मुझे पह्चानो, मैं तो नींव हूँ हर परिवार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

अगर आज मारोगे आप बेटियों को
कल को फ़िर बेटे कहाँ से लाओगे ।
जीवनदायिनी को यूं बलि चढाकर
किसके साथ नयी दुनियाँ बसाओगे ।
जरा कल्पना करो, बिना नारी के संसार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥



Save the Girl Child. Stop Female Foeticide.

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anilsinghd
March 16th, 2009, 11:02 PM
Good compiltion with an great messag ! :) !!!

Do not know when people will wake up from the deep slumber they have put themselves in! :)

PrashantHooda
March 17th, 2009, 01:04 AM
Great composition Vijay Ji.
Thanks for this msg. :)

kulduhan
March 17th, 2009, 01:37 AM
Gud moral thoughts indeed.

Appreciable collection /Thanks

vijay
March 17th, 2009, 01:41 AM
Good compiltion with an great messag ! :) !!!

Do not know when people will wake up from the deep slumber they have put themselves in! :)


Great composition Vijay Ji.
Thanks for this msg. :)

Anil and Prashant, Thanx a lot for the appreciation :)

vijay
March 17th, 2009, 08:37 AM
Gud moral thoughts indeed.

Appreciable collection /Thanks

Thanks Kuldeep.
This is not a collection but is my own composition. :)

amritameerut01
March 17th, 2009, 09:24 AM
Bahut hi khoobsurti ke saath ek naari ki vyatha ka varnan kiya hai Vijay ji. Hope everybody read this and grasp the message.

Well, I also wanted to share something related to women....
Why Women Cry


A little boy asked his mother, "Why are you crying?"
"Because I'm a woman," she told him.
"I don't understand," he said.
His Mom just hugged him and said , "And you never will."

Later the little boy asked his father, "Why does mother seem to cry for no reason?"

"All women cry for no reason," was all his dad could say.

The little boy grew up and became a man, still wondering why women cry.

Finally he put in a call to God. When God got on the phone, he asked, "God, why do women cry so easily?"

God said:

"When I made the woman she had to be special.

I made her shoulders strong enough to carry the weight of the world,

yet gentle enough to give comfort.

I gave her an inner strength to endure childbirth and the rejection that many times comes from her children.

I gave her a hardness that allows her to keep going when everyone else gives up, and take care of her family through sickness and fatigue without complaining.

I gave her the sensitivity to love her children under any and all circumstances, even when her child has hurt her very badly.

I gave her strength to carry he! r husband through his faults and fashioned her from his rib to protect his heart.

I gave her wisdom to know that a good husband never hurts his wife, but sometimes tests her strengths and her resolve to stand beside him unfalteringly.

And finally, I gave her a tear to shed. This is hers exclusively to use whenever it is needed."

"You see my son," said God, "the beauty of a woman is not in the clothes she wears, the figure that she carries, or the way she combs her hair.

The beauty of a woman must be seen in her eyes, because that is the doorway to her heart - the place where love resides..."

Nishantrathi82
March 17th, 2009, 09:43 AM
Amrita g and Vijay g wonderfull compositions thanks for sharing.
I wish people will wake up and start behaving like Humans.

Samarkadian
March 17th, 2009, 10:39 AM
मुझे मत मारो
( एक कन्या भ्रूण की पुकार )

मैं कुदरत का वरदान, वस्तु नहीं बेकार की
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

माँ, आप खुद भी तो एक नारी हो
किसलिये मेरी बलि को तैयार हुई ।
ममता की वो जीती जागती मूरत
कैसे इस महापाप में भागीदार हुई ।
मुझे अपनाओ, मुझे तो जरुरत है दुलार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

पिताजी, क्या दूध का कर्ज़ भूल गये
आपको भी जन्म दिया एक नारी ने ।
अपने दिल के टुकडे को मार डालोगे
इतना वहशी बनाया किस लाचारी ने ।
मुझे स्वीकारो, मैं मूरत आपके संस्कार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

डॉक्टर जी, आप तो रहम कीजिये
आपको तो जीवनदाता कहा जाता है ।
एक लाचार व मासूम को मारते हुए
क्या आपको भी दर्द नहीं आता है ।
मुझे जीने दो, मैं तो रचना हूँ पालनहार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

वकील जी, आप न्याय के पहरेदार
अनेक बेगुनाहों को रोज़ बचाते हो ।
कितना अन्याय हो रहा मेरे साथ
फ़िर आप किसलिये मुँह छिपाते हो ।
मुझे बचाओ, सजा करवाओ गुनाहगार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

पुलिस जी, आप जनता के रखवाले
क्या मैं जनता में गिनी नहीं जाती ।
किसलिये खामोश है आपका डंडा
क्यों मेरी चीत्कार सुनी नहीं जाती ।
रक्षा कीजिये एक बेजुबान और लाचार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

सब चुपचाप देख रहे हैं मेरी हत्या
मुझे बचाने कोई क्यों नहीं भागता ।
एक मासूम बच्ची की पुकार सुनके
क्या किसी का जमीर नहीं जागता ।
रोक दो आज से रिवाज ये अत्याचार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

प्रक्रति के बनाये नियम मत तोडो
नारी के बिना ये जीवन अधूरा है ।
जरा अपने आप से पूछ कर देखो
कौन-सा नर, नारी के बिना पूरा है ।
मुझे पह्चानो, मैं तो नींव हूँ हर परिवार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥

अगर आज मारोगे आप बेटियों को
कल को फ़िर बेटे कहाँ से लाओगे ।
जीवनदायिनी को यूं बलि चढाकर
किसके साथ नयी दुनियाँ बसाओगे ।
जरा कल्पना करो, बिना नारी के संसार की ।
मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥



Save the Girl Child. Stop Female Foeticide.

.

Infact a genuine concern towards a severe problem.Vijay needs no introduction when it comes to creativity and thoughtfullness.Here I would suggest to Satyeshwar and his team including Wiki to start showing such social messages as flash on 'main forum page'.This would be real giving back to society in terms of awareness as Jats nationwide facing severe absence of females.We shouldn't wait otherwise Jatnis would be found only is museums.

suniljakhar
March 17th, 2009, 12:43 PM
Quite commendable and thought provoking creation Vijay.

Thanks for sharing it with us!!

Lets each one of us imbibe the noble thought in our lives!!


मुझे मत मारो
( एक कन्या भ्रूण की पुकार )

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मुझे मत मारो, मैं तो जननी हूँ संसार की ॥


Save the Girl Child. Stop Female Foeticide.

.

neetu21
March 17th, 2009, 02:00 PM
Very nice composition Vijay ji, thanks for posting :)...


मुझे मत मारो
( एक कन्या भ्रूण की पुकार )


Save the Girl Child. Stop Female Foeticide.

.

jitendershooda
March 17th, 2009, 02:05 PM
Bhai Vijay bahut hi badhiya likha hai aapne .... I second Samar's view of putting such social messages on the front page of JL too with the author's name

anilsinghd
March 17th, 2009, 04:01 PM
Bhai Vijay bahut hi badhiya likha hai aapne .... I second Samar's view of putting such social messages on the front page of JL too with the author's name


Agreed with Jitender and Samar on this!

Indeed a good suggestion!
:)

vijay
March 17th, 2009, 06:14 PM
Bahut hi khoobsurti ke saath ek naari ki vyatha ka varnan kiya hai Vijay ji. Hope everybody read this and grasp the message.

Well, I also wanted to share something related to women....
Why Women Cry

A little boy asked his mother, "Why are you crying?"
"Because I'm a woman," she told him.
"I don't understand," he said.
His Mom just hugged himand said , "And you never will."


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The beauty of a woman must be seen in her eyes, because that is the doorway to her heart - the place where love resides..."



Thanks a lot for the appreciation, Amrita :)
Nice sharing by you, too.
Lets us hope people will think about it for the goodness.

vijay
March 17th, 2009, 06:19 PM
Quite commendable and thought provoking creation Vijay.

Thanks for sharing it with us!!

Lets each one of us imbibe the noble thought in our lives!!

Yes Sunil, this is need of the hour for the sake of our next generations as well as mankind.
Thanx for the appreciation :)

vijay
March 17th, 2009, 06:25 PM
Infact a genuine concern towards a severe problem.Vijay needs no introduction when it comes to creativity and thoughtfullness.Here I would suggest to Satyeshwar and his team including Wiki to start showing such social messages as flash on 'main forum page'.This would be real giving back to society in terms of awareness as Jats nationwide facing severe absence of females.We shouldn't wait otherwise Jatnis would be found only is museums.

Samar, thanks for the nice words and appreciation.
Social messeges should be the first priority of a social forum to substantiate its meaning.
Nice suggestion :)

vijay
March 17th, 2009, 06:28 PM
Bhai Vijay bahut hi badhiya likha hai aapne .... I second Samar's view of putting such social messages on the front page of JL too with the author's name

Thanks, Jitender Bhai
I hope that the message carries the substance to think over it. :)

sunitahooda
March 17th, 2009, 06:30 PM
Appreciable Vijay, like other compositions. Similar thread was started by Dr.Ranbir Dahiya:)

Rmandaura
March 17th, 2009, 06:44 PM
Vijay, very good composition on a very important issue. Amrita's article is also good.

We should all spread the awareness around us. I am posting few last lines of an article dedicated to all women.

Please appreciate "HER"


I hope you will do.... Take an oath to appreciate her for all work she does.
And if she is a house wife , then too learn to appreciate the work she does, your house is a home because of her!!!
That's why they call a house wife a home maker!!!

vijay
March 17th, 2009, 09:31 PM
Very nice composition Vijay ji, thanks for posting :)...

Thanks a lot, Neetu. :)
It feels so nice to be appreciated by the people on such a social concern.


Appreciable Vijay, like other compositions. Similar thread was started by Dr.Ranbir Dahiya:)

Thanks Sunita :)
Maybe i missed somehow Dr. Dahiya's thread on this issue but i bet that he might had conveyed the message beautifully with much substance.

vijay
March 17th, 2009, 09:35 PM
Vijay, very good composition on a very important issue. Amrita's article is also good.

We should all spread the awareness around us. I am posting few last lines of an article dedicated to all women.

Please appreciate "HER"


I hope you will do.... Take an oath to appreciate her for all work she does.
And if she is a house wife , then too learn to appreciate the work she does, your house is a home because of her!!!
That's why they call a house wife a home maker!!!

I agree with you Sir.
We should appreciate HER for the works, comittments and sacrifices she does. She can make any building a HOME.
Thanks a lot for the Appreciation. :)

poonam
March 17th, 2009, 10:50 PM
Lets each one of us imbibe the noble thought in our lives!!


Exactly!!
This is what is required..action!

If this poem could change/improve sick mindset of even a handful of people out there...well...I would be more than happy!

vijay
March 18th, 2009, 12:20 AM
Exactly!!
This is what is required..action!

If this poem could change/improve sick mindset of even a handful of people out there...well...I would be more than happy!

Well .... at least we can try to make Them understand by the methods we are capable of ... :)

poonam
March 18th, 2009, 12:54 AM
Well .... at least we can try to make Them understand by the methods we are capable of ... :)

Sure..certainly, by all means.

I didnt mean any sort of apathy to your composition if you felt so, rather it is laudable that you are doing your bit.

Perhaps, its my frustration and disappointment over the issue that is leading my emotions here!

vijay
March 18th, 2009, 01:26 AM
Sure..certainly, by all means.

I didnt mean any sort of apathy to your composition if you felt so, rather it is laudable that you are doing your bit.

Perhaps, its my frustration and disappointment over the issue that is leading my emotions here!

No Poonam, i didn't felt like this. Infact i saw the frustration, disappointment or sarcasm in your post so just commented. We should do whatever we can do on this issue becuase that is in our capability and rest is on the mindset of sick people how far they can understand.

We should not loose hope and should keep trying. :)

skadian123
April 23rd, 2009, 06:14 PM
Dear Vijay,

Though a little late, let me still congratulate you for putting across the message in such a beautiful manner.

Hope the message goes across to each and every one of us loud and clear because I am sure it's not just coincidence to come across so many two-son families these days. It's becoming increasingly rare especially in our community to find a girl child in a family. This is not only prevalent in the less educated families but also highly educated and well-to-do families.

In a free democracy like India we are enjoying (misusing) all the liberties but there may come a time when like China restrictions/stipulations would have to be imposed on the population to make it more disciplined and coherent in actions in the larger interest of the society.

balram
April 29th, 2009, 06:04 PM
Very gooood poem sir...keep it up Sir........

aryasatyadev
May 12th, 2009, 07:57 PM
Nice work Vijay and Amrita........ this is need of the hour........ pls keep the flame burning

ISTeotia9
May 13th, 2009, 12:08 PM
Sir, very beautifully crafted composition..............really appreciable!
plz continue posting such compositions on burning social issues...........!