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santoshbenaam
October 20th, 2003, 05:42 PM
Tumhari jeet ho ye meri dua hai
In aankho ne tumko hi chua hai
Kahty hai log dil me hoty hai jajbaat
Tum meri ho ye jajbato ka phaisla hua hai
Tumhari jeet ho ye meri dua hai
In aankho ne tumko hi chua hai
Zindagi kya hai ek pal ka pata nahi
Pal me koi bichad gaya koi apna hua hai
Haath choot jaye to koi gam nahi
Dil se dil to mila hua hai
Tumhari jeet ho ye meri dua hai
In aankho ne tumko hi chua hai
santosh benaam
uday
October 20th, 2003, 08:11 PM
Very Nice..
santosh benaam (Oct 20, 2003 08:12 a.m.):
Zindagi kya hai ek pal ka pata nahi
Pal me koi bichad gaya koi apna hua hai
Haath choot jaye to koi gam nahi
Dil se dil to mila hua hai
santosh benaam
dineshm
October 21st, 2003, 05:28 PM
kyaa baat hai......
akdabas
October 21st, 2003, 07:36 PM
santosh benaam (Oct 20, 2003 08:12 a.m.):
Tumhari jeet ho ye meri dua hai
In aankho ne tumko hi chua hai
Kahty hai log dil me hoty hai jajbaat
Tum meri ho ye jajbato ka phaisla hua hai
Tumhari jeet ho ye meri dua hai
In aankho ne tumko hi chua hai
Zindagi kya hai ek pal ka pata nahi
Pal me koi bichad gaya koi apna hua hai
Haath choot jaye to koi gam nahi
Dil se dil to mila hua hai
Tumhari jeet ho ye meri dua hai
In aankho ne tumko hi chua hai
santosh benaam
Wah bhai bahut badhiya.
jaatni
October 21st, 2003, 10:03 PM
excellent....good piece of poetry...
ranjitjat
October 21st, 2003, 11:43 PM
Very nice Benam
Tumari bhi Jeet ho ye meri dua hai
Manjil bahut dur hae- Safar to abhi saru huva hae !!!!
Deloo ka Khel vah Manjil
Hae DHarmpal
ISS PER CHALNAY WALAI
HAMAESA LADKHADA JATAY HAN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rinu
October 22nd, 2003, 03:14 AM
SuPeRb..........Benanm Ji
RiNu
santoshbenaam
October 24th, 2003, 05:19 PM
main aap sabhi ka bahut sukriya ada karta hu,
bas aap isi tarah se meri kavita padhty rahiye.
sukriya.
raka73
November 2nd, 2003, 07:37 AM
kya bat hai jaat sayri bhi karte hai. Good to know. just keep it up buddy...
rkumar
November 2nd, 2003, 08:37 AM
Beautiful....
Here is one sher I wrote on similar feelings...
Aane laga hai hume maja, aajkal shikast khaane me
Kyoonki lagta hai unhe achaa, hume dekhna es haal me
Rajendra
replypradeepk
November 5th, 2003, 11:13 PM
santosh benaam
it is realy good sir
santoshbenaam
November 7th, 2003, 08:17 PM
sukriya
santosh benaam
VirenderNarwal
November 11th, 2003, 07:20 PM
tumhara bhi naam sayri mein chamke hamari bhi ye dua hai