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raj_ecstasy
August 7th, 2002, 04:51 PM
hey guyz,i have never ever met a romantic jat gal or guy in my life,why r v so rude?? is there any poet around,i mean amateaur,like me?? how can i send private messages to u?? wanna see my poems??two of them got me 2000 bucks in a competition!!!
raj, (doing BA(H) Hist. from DU)

scsheorayan
August 7th, 2002, 05:30 PM
Congratulations and Welcome !
Yes there are a few poets here and will introduce them to you. In the mean time please post your poems for all to enjoy.

amitdahiya
August 7th, 2002, 10:59 PM
Dear Raj
Welcome to Jatland. I have some pretensions of calling myself a poet. I write of Nature,my people and the power of passion. I too have won a few modest prizes and in september an American poetry society are publishing my poems in an anthology called 'Letters from the soul' I have posted some poetry on this site but i cant seem to find it any more perhaps they have removed it to make space. We would love to read some of your work meanwhile i am posting one of my works here as a humble welcome gift for you


A Jats Transition

Farewell field of diamond dew
and saffron morning light
and deep wet earth that sucks and holds
as frozen birds take flight
now one farewell to all the love
that milks the cows to froth
and stirs the blood and strokes the flame
till work and love are broth
A last farewell to the things I knew
and the things I dont know yet
words fade to nothing as the cows come home
and softly dust sunset

Kakroi 1999 November

bharti
August 11th, 2002, 03:55 PM
Raj....
jats are not rude .... they speak Truth
aur sach hamesha kadwa lagta hai aur sach kehne wala Rude

let us see some of ur poetry.

ranjitjat
August 12th, 2002, 07:36 PM
Bharati Apany to maery atama ki bat kah di.meri bhi adat hh sachibat muh per kahany ki.
Kahata to mae apany penny mae subhchintak ky tor per kae bhae kasuty narajho ja ss eesliya monbharat lae rakha tha. per apki sachi- khari bat sun kar 2 line likh raha hu
Dear Raj & bharati ji
Bharati ji apaki baat mae pura daamm hh
Raj bhae ki baat bhi konsi kam hh

Sach ko tahriro mae paogy na takriro mae |
Sach kahi ha to vah ha insanoo ky seenny mae

Bharati ji sach kah kar apany kar diya kamall
Maeny bhi monbarat tod kar likhany ka kiya kiyal
Sach kahu to jagt rudtth hh
Aur vina kahay raha na jaya|
Aakhir Kichad bahi per hogaa
Jeet Thharagaa pani jayaa ||
Karani bharani paar utarni sabi ka lekha dy insan
Neki kar dariya mae dal dhy sach ka rakshak hh Bhagwan
Jab jatani bhi jag gae to jitt gy jiwan yudh Jats balwan
Bhumandal per raj karagy Arya akshatary jats mahan
EEsay jatdarsan darpan ko dharan karo jat balwan
Jiski karni oar khathani nae auntar nahi ho usako kahaty insan mahan
Usi ko JATDEWATA kahaty usi ko kahaty JATMAHAN
Jiski Atama SATYA ko dharan karti vaahi sadav
basata BHAGWAN

mansi
August 12th, 2002, 09:10 PM
JAI JAI JAI HANUMAN GOSAIN KRIPA KARON HUMPAR DHARAMPAL BHAI!
BOLO BAJRANG BALI KI JAI!
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Aug 12, 2002 10:06 a.m.):
Bharati Apany to maery atama ki bat kah di.meri bhi adat hh sachibat muh per kahany ki.
Kahata to mae apany penny mae subhchintak ky tor per kae bhae kasuty narajho ja ss eesliya monbharat lae rakha tha. per apki sachi- khari bat sun kar 2 line likh raha hu
Dear Raj & bharati ji
Bharati ji apaki baat mae pura daamm hh
Raj bhae ki baat bhi konsi kam hh

Sach ko tahriro mae paogy na takriro mae |
Sach kahi ha to vah ha insanoo ky seenny mae

Bharati ji sach kah kar apany kar diya kamall
Maeny bhi monbarat tod kar likhany ka kiya kiyal
Sach kahu to jagt rudtth hh
Aur vina kahay raha na jaya|
Aakhir Kichad bahi per hogaa
Jeet Thharagaa pani jayaa ||
Karani bharani paar utarni sabi ka lekha dy insan
Neki kar dariya mae dal dhy sach ka rakshak hh Bhagwan
Jab jatani bhi jag gae to jitt gy jiwan yudh Jats balwan
Bhumandal per raj karagy Arya akshatary jats mahan
EEsay jatdarsan darpan ko dharan karo jat balwan
Jiski karni oar khathani nae auntar nahi ho usako kahaty insan mahan
Usi ko JATDEWATA kahaty usi ko kahaty JATMAHAN
Jiski Atama SATYA ko dharan karti vaahi sadav
basata BHAGWAN

ranjitjat
August 13th, 2002, 03:28 AM
Mansi Bahin ji AAP NY BHI KASUTA KAMAL KAR DIYA -KATI JAT CHALISSA LIKH DIYA EESAKO PURA KARDO NAHI TO MEARY KO KARNA HOGA
AAPNY MUJH KO JATDEWATA AUR HANUMAN JI KADARJA DAEDIYA. MM TT HANUMAN JI KA BHAGAT SU AAP BAHINBHAEO KA SEVADAR. DAYA KIRPA TO BHAGWAN-HANUMANJI KI BAHUT HAMPER. SUBH KAMANO KY LIYA BAHUT DANYABAD. RAJESH SY PHALY TT KASATTEE
MA HI BHYJ DOGA 1 SAL SY PHALYHI.
GREETINGS-RAMRAM

saurabhsaharan
August 13th, 2002, 04:08 AM
Shree Guru charan saroj raj, Nij monu mukuru sudhari

Baranau Raghubara bimala jasu, Jo daayaku phalchaari

Buddhi- heen tanu jaani-key, Sumirou pawan- koomaar

Bal budhi vidyaa dehu mohi, Haarahu kales bikaar

Jai Hanuman gyaan guna saagar, Jai kapees tihu lok ujaagar

Raam duta atulit bal dhaamaa, Anjani-putra pawan-sut naamaa

Mahaa-bir vikram bajrangi, Kumati nibaar sumati key sangi

Kanchan barana biraaj subesaa, Kaanana kundal kunchita kesaa

Haath bajara au dhwajaa viraajai, Kandhey muj jane-yu saajai

Sankar suwan keshari nandan, Tej prataap mahaa jag bandan

Vidyaa-baan guni oti chaatur, Ram kaaj kori-bey ko aatur

Prabhu charitra sunivey ko rosiyaa, Ram Lakhan Seeta mana basiyaa

Sukshma roop dhari siyahi dikhaawaa, Birat roop dhari lanka jaraawaa

Bhim roop dhariasur samhaarey, Ramchandra key kaaj samwaarey

Laaya sanjiwan lakhan jeewaa-ey, Sree Raghubir harasi woor laa-ey

Ragupoti kinhee bohut baraa-yi, Tum mam priya Bharat-hee sam bhaa-yi

Sahas badan tum-haro jas gaawai, Aws kohi Sripoti kanth lagaawai

Sanakaadik Brahmaadi munisaa, Naarad saarad sohit aheesaa

Jam kuver dig-paal jahaa tey, Kobid kohi sakey kahaa tey

Tum woopkaar sugriba-hee kinhaa, Ram milaai raaj pad dinhaa

Tumharo mantra Bibhisan maanaa, Lankeshwar bha-ye sab jag jaanaa

Jug sahasra jojan par bhaanu, Leelyo taahi modhur phal jaanu

Prabhu mudrikaa meli mukh maahee, Jaladhi laanghi ga-ey acharaj naahi

Durgham kaaj jagat ke jete, Sugam anugraha tumharey teje

Ram duwar-ye tum rakh-waarey, Hoth na aagyaa binu paisaarey

Sab sukh lahai tumhaari sarnaa, Tum rach-chhak kaahu ko dar naa

Aapan tej samhaaroo aapai, Teeno lok hank te kaampai

Bhut pishaach nikat nohi aawai, Mahaabir jab nam sunaawai

Naasai roj harai sab piraa, Japat nirantar Hanumat beera

Sankat te Hanuman chhuraawai, Man kram bachan dhyaan jo laawai

Sab par Ram tapaswi raajaa, Teen ke kaajh sakal tum saajaa

Owr manoratj jo koi laawai, Soi omit jeewaan paawai

Chaaro jug partaap tumhaaraa, Hai par-siddh jagat wooji-yaraa

Sadhu sant ke tum rakh-waarey, Osur nikandan Ram dulaarey

Ast siddhi nou nidhi ke daataa, Aws bar deena Jaanki maataa

Ram rasaayan tumharey paasaa, Sadhaa raho Raghupoti ke daasaa

Tumharey bhajan Ram ko paawai, Janam janam ke dukh bisraawai

Anth kaal Raghubar pur jaa-ee, Jahaa hanama Hari-bhakta kahaa-ee

Owr devtaa chitta na dhara-ee, Hanumat seha sarba sukh kara-ee

Sankat katai meetai sab peeraa, Jo sumirai Hamat bal-beeraa

Jai jai jai Hanuman gosaai, Kripaa karahu guru dev kee naai

Jo sata baar paath kar ko-ee, Chhutahi bandi mahaa sukh ho-ee

Jo yaha parowi Hanuman chalisaa, Hoy siddhi saakhi gowrisaa

Tulsidaas sadaa Hari cheraa, Keejoi naatha hridai mohu deraa



Pawan tan-ai sankat harah, Mangal murati roop

Ram Lachhan Seetaa sohit, Hridai basahu sur bhoop

rajeshsindhu
August 13th, 2002, 05:54 AM
Le bhai, chhidge Jat kavee!!!!!

keep it up folks!
-Rajesh

ranjitjat
August 13th, 2002, 12:18 PM
BOLO BAJRANGBALI KY JAY JAY JAY JAY JAY
SORABH BHAE KI JAY_____________________
MANSI BAYBAY kI JAY ___________________
SARAV JAT SAMAJ ki JAY------------------------

shokeen123
August 13th, 2002, 08:08 PM
Saurabh,

Bhai tu hanuman ke pichhey haath dho ke padgya!

Good use of your time though! ...I read in one of your other comments..."As usual I was doing nothing in the office...!"

Sujata

mansi
August 13th, 2002, 09:16 PM
Bhai Dharampal
bhot bhot dhanyawad aap ka in achi baton kai liya,please don't mind bhai, it was all to make atmosphere bit light and was in good sense and not to tease you!:-)
ESA BAT PAI BOL DAYO BHI JAI BAJRANG BALI KI!
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Aug 12, 2002 05:58 p.m.):
Mansi Bahin ji AAP NY BHI KASUTA KAMAL KAR DIYA -KATI JAT CHALISSA LIKH DIYA EESAKO PURA KARDO NAHI TO MEARY KO KARNA HOGA
AAPNY MUJH KO JATDEWATA AUR HANUMAN JI KADARJA DAEDIYA. MM TT HANUMAN JI KA BHAGAT SU AAP BAHINBHAEO KA SEVADAR. DAYA KIRPA TO BHAGWAN-HANUMANJI KI BAHUT HAMPER. SUBH KAMANO KY LIYA BAHUT DANYABAD. RAJESH SY PHALY TT KASATTEE
MA HI BHYJ DOGA 1 SAL SY PHALYHI.
GREETINGS-RAMRAM

shokeen123
August 13th, 2002, 09:20 PM
Mansi,

Jiji tu rahan de...na te yo Saurabh pher hanuman chaalisa number 2 post kar dega....

cheers!

Sujata

anurana
August 13th, 2002, 09:23 PM
Bajrangbali bhi pareshaan ho rahe honge ki dharti pe ke hon lag raha sai. Ye jat mere peeche kyu pade ss

akdabas
August 13th, 2002, 11:43 PM
Ib bechaare HANUMAAN JI ke pichhe laag liye bhai devataao nai tai baksh do.

saurabhsaharan
August 14th, 2002, 12:19 AM
ram ram!!!

Dabas bhai meri ke majaal jo mai pawan putra ke paache padun, mai toh unkaa adnaa sa bhakt hun :)

sujata jiji kaam toh mai office me kati na kiya kartaa,,arr hanumaan chaalisa bhi jabaani yaad se,,parr itnaa saara type karan ki himmat konyaa,,yo sabb toh internet arr copy/paste kaa kamaal se :)

Arr rahi baat Hanuman Ji arr Jaatan ki,,toh bhaai ye rishtaa toh ghanaa puraana arr gehraa se,,,arr iski geharaai ka vyakhyaan JatLand pe kai baar ho chukya se :)

shokeen123
August 14th, 2002, 12:28 AM
Saurabh,

Bhai munne bera tha tu lamba chouda jawaab dega, par bhai mai er Mansi tere humor te bhot impressed sain, isiliye tunne chhaydati rah sain.

Tu nu kar, baki sari aarti bi cut er paste kar de.
Aur bhai aaj chat-wat te disable hori sai, lunch wunch kar liya?

Bichara Arun bhai dhoondh tha kavi sum-maylan, pagya hanuman!

Sujata

mansi
August 14th, 2002, 01:34 AM
Bhai aaj tharaya mangalwar ar mangalwar nai bajrang bali ti yad nahin karan gai to kisti yad karan gai!aj to hanuman ji ka aa din sai .jai bajrang bali ki!
hanuman bhi kah sa kai ya to sara jat mera pacha pad lo nahin to main sara jatan ka pacha pad jaun ga to acha to yo aa sai kai jat aa hanuman ji kai pecha padlewan kada to thawa aa ga!:)EK BAR AUR SARA BOL DO JOR TAIN ,JAI BAJRANG BALI KI!BHALA KARA SARAN KA RAM!

saurabhsaharan
August 14th, 2002, 01:36 AM
Lunch wunch toh jiji karyaa naa abhi. waise aaj mai roti ghar te hi baandh layaa sun,,parr khayi konyaa abhi...

arr ek baat mere palle kati na pad-ri se,,maybe some of you who work in america can help me out,,jabb te manne office me kaam dhaam karna chhodyaa se, office waale kaafi khush se,,,,promotion bhi karr diyaa arr increment bhi de diya,,manne toh yaa sochke kaam tyaga thaa akk lay off ho jaaun, parr yaa toh ganga ulti hi beh gi,,

bhai ke amrikaa me unhe lay off karaa karen, jo kaam kare se,,arr mhaare jise nithalle ka promotion??? Ghanaa confusion ho rha se,,,bhaai jo meri samasya ka samaadhaan ho thaare dhore toh jarur bataao,,,arr jo iss baat ka mazaak udaayoge toh aur bhi badhiya :)))

shokeen123
August 14th, 2002, 01:45 AM
Bhai Saurabh,

tu ek baat bata, tu apne aap te baat kar rhya sai ya kisi bande te? munne kuchh mamla smajh ma nahi aaya? Yo lay off ka er tera key sambandh? Bhai tu kit Enron ke dhor te na rahta na?

Bhai isbaat ne te hanuman ji suljhaanwenge. Bhai aaj mangal ka barat er tu ghar te roti bandh laya? Bhai theek, tu nu kar tu sook-kar (on Friday) ne santosi ma ka barat kar liye....

:-D

Jiji

akdabas
August 14th, 2002, 01:46 AM
[quote]Saurabh Saharan (Aug 13, 2002 02:50 p.m.):
ram ram!!!

Dabas bhai meri ke majaal jo mai pawan putra ke paache padun, mai toh unkaa adnaa sa bhakt hun :)

JAY RAM JI ki Bhai Saurabh,
Main to majak karun tha bura mat maaniye.

mansi
August 14th, 2002, 01:53 AM
Sujata di
sook-kar var (friday)ka varat dharan tain kai ho ja ga saurabh bhai gail??????:-?
Sujata (Aug 13, 2002 04:15 p.m.):
Bhai Saurabh,

tu ek baat bata, tu apne aap te baat kar rhya sai ya kisi bande te? munne kuchh mamla smajh ma nahi aaya? Yo lay off ka er tera key sambandh? Bhai tu kit Enron ke dhor te na rahta na?

Bhai isbaat ne te hanuman ji suljhaanwenge. Bhai aaj mangal ka barat er tu ghar te roti bandh laya? Bhai theek, tu nu kar tu sook-kar (on Friday) ne santosi ma ka barat kar liye....

:-D

Jiji

shokeen123
August 14th, 2002, 01:53 AM
Saurabh Bhai,

tunne yo "general talk" section "humor" mai kyun turn kar diya?

Yo Mansi bi kum konya, laagi rah sai "Jai bajrang bali" ke bukhaar mai!

:-D

Jiji

shokeen123
August 14th, 2002, 01:56 AM
[quote]Mansi (Aug 13, 2002 04:23 p.m.):

"Sujata di sook-kar var (friday)ka varat dharan tain kai ho ja ga saurabh bhai gail"


Jiji Mansi...yo lay off ho jyaga.....

:-D

saurabhsaharan
August 14th, 2002, 01:59 AM
hmmmm,,maamla gehra se,,,yo chatt khul jya ferr samjhaunga :))

16 duni 8,,hahaha

mansi
August 14th, 2002, 02:02 AM
OKAY ?????:-?

saurabhsaharan
August 14th, 2002, 02:03 AM
JAY RAM JI ki Bhai Saurabh,
Main to majak karun tha bura mat maaniye.[/quote]

Jai Ram ji ki Dabas bhai,,,kati buraa na manayaa bhai manne,,aap nyu hi comment kare jaao bass :)))

saurabhsaharan
August 14th, 2002, 02:07 AM
mansi ji,,ke confusion ho rhya se aapko? :)

mansi
August 14th, 2002, 02:09 AM
COOL BHAI ??????:-?

shokeen123
August 14th, 2002, 02:09 AM
[quote][b]Mansi (Aug 13, 2002 04:32 p.m.)

"OKAY ?????:-?"

Jiji tu kyun maada mun kare sai, iski yo hey ichhya sai!

Hey guys, its 4:30 PM on the east coast, time to go take care of kids!

Poooooor Saurabh......will be lonely......

bye now, take care!

jiji

saurabhsaharan
August 14th, 2002, 02:15 AM
mansi ji,,yo bhunde bhunde mu kyukarr banaao ho??,,,,arr yo "COOL BHAI" kon se?? :)

shokeen123
August 14th, 2002, 03:24 AM
Ley bhai Saurabh,

mai gharan bi aali par tu ibbi hanuman ka kissa liye baitha sai. Mansi bhoonda muh nu banaave sa, because I joked about you getting layed off from work!

Kaal Arun login karega tu sochega...hmm! ek topic pe 30 kaviyaan ki entry?

Take it easy! Now it's really time to do some household chores. Khana banana (tikday er ganthay!) Aur pher bhai pados ma gimman (Gym) jaana sai. See you tomorrow... keep smiling!

:-)

jiji

ranjitjat
August 14th, 2002, 03:53 AM
Bahin aurbhaeo jamkar bhath jao yo sangto sary saman hoga.Saurabh bhae hanumanji ka bhagat to nokari bhi pakgae aur parmotion bhi.Hanumanji aur jatdewta manawan sy jatlandper bhi shanti rahagy aur atama mae bhi. yah to bhaeo-bahino safalta ka mulmantar hh . so sary milkar bolo
Bajrangbali ki jay.Pawanputar hanuman ki jay
saman ky geet hondo-
Aahla gavae bhar chomasy
Jab din rat howe barsat
Marwan Nihaldy ka prem parsang
sunkar sabhi ky khusy sy kat din rat
Khal bhi sang esi jagah hoga- jhanda gad gaya
Bolo Krishan Bhagwan ki jay
jat sainto ki jay-Sabhi santan ki jay
Bajrangbali ki jay-jay-jay-jay-jay

mansi
August 14th, 2002, 10:02 AM
BHAI DHARAMPAL
MANA URA KITA KOTHLI KA JIKAR SA SUNA THA PAR ES KA BAD MANA NAHIN BERA YO JIKAR KIT GAYA!LAGA HAI KOTHLI BHAJ DI DHARAMPAL BHAI NAI .BHAI DHRAMPAL MERA TI INFORM TO KAR DIYA HOTA KOTHLI ON THE WAY KARAN TAIN PEHLAN MAIN TRAC RAKHDI US KA!:-)
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Aug 12, 2002 05:58 p.m.):
Mansi Bahin ji AAP NY BHI KASUTA KAMAL KAR DIYA -KATI JAT CHALISSA LIKH DIYA EESAKO PURA KARDO NAHI TO MEARY KO KARNA HOGA
AAPNY MUJH KO JATDEWATA AUR HANUMAN JI KADARJA DAEDIYA. MM TT HANUMAN JI KA BHAGAT SU AAP BAHINBHAEO KA SEVADAR. DAYA KIRPA TO BHAGWAN-HANUMANJI KI BAHUT HAMPER. SUBH KAMANO KY LIYA BAHUT DANYABAD. RAJESH SY PHALY TT KASATTEE
MA HI BHYJ DOGA 1 SAL SY PHALYHI.
GREETINGS-RAMRAM

mansi
August 14th, 2002, 10:09 AM
BHAI SAURABH
BHONDA MONH NAHIN BANAU TO KA KARON MERA BHAI TI LAY OFF KAR DIYA BATA KOYA BAT SA YA BHI !:-)LAI BHAI HANS DI EEB TO RAJI SAI ,BUS BHAI TI RAJI RAHNA CHAHIYA:-)PHAR HANS DI!:-)NUN TO MAIN HASDI AA RHUN GI TO YOU REPLY KAD POST KARUN GI!:-)
Saurabh Saharan (Aug 13, 2002 04:45 p.m.):
mansi ji,,yo bhunde bhunde mu kyukarr banaao ho??,,,,arr yo "COOL BHAI" kon se?? :)

mansi
August 14th, 2002, 10:15 AM
DHARAMPAL BHAI
PHAR AAP NAIN YA GEET KI KASAT MERI KOTHLI MAIN BHAJI AK NAHIN! ............NA MAIN TO BAS CONFIRM KARON THI.!KADA KOTHLI MIL JA AR US MAIN KASAT NAHIN HO!:-)
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Aug 13, 2002 06:23 p.m.):
Bahin aurbhaeo jamkar bhath jao yo sangto sary saman hoga.Saurabh bhae hanumanji ka bhagat to nokari bhi pakgae aur parmotion bhi.Hanumanji aur jatdewta manawan sy jatlandper bhi shanti rahagy aur atama mae bhi. yah to bhaeo-bahino safalta ka mulmantar hh . so sary milkar bolo
Bajrangbali ki jay.Pawanputar hanuman ki jay
saman ky geet hondo-
Aahla gavae bhar chomasy
Jab din rat howe barsat
Marwan Nihaldy ka prem parsang
sunkar sabhi ky khusy sy kat din rat
Khal bhi sang esi jagah hoga- jhanda gad gaya
Bolo Krishan Bhagwan ki jay
jat sainto ki jay-Sabhi santan ki jay
Bajrangbali ki jay-jay-jay-jay-jay

saurabhsaharan
August 14th, 2002, 10:19 AM
ram ram mansi jiji,,,,yo aapke aansoo ek hi aankh te tapkaa karen?? maaf karna thoda confusion se iss chehre ko dekh ke :)

bass abh yo aansoo aala chehra chhor do arr nyu hi haste haste post karte raho :)

mansi
August 14th, 2002, 10:29 AM
SAURABH BHAI
HERE IT COMES ALL SMILES JUST FOR YOU:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

saurabhsaharan
August 14th, 2002, 12:51 PM
mansi jiji,,jai bajrang bali ki!!!

anurana
August 14th, 2002, 06:06 PM
Bhai tum ne to is thread ka kati e chat room bana liya ss. Majja sa aa raha hai. Sujataji ki baat theek ss Raj to nu e sooche ja ek ghane e kavi katte ho gaye.....

ranjitjat
August 14th, 2002, 11:51 PM
Mansi JIJI
Waday bhae ky faraj na to mma samju su per mae bimar hogaya tha esliya kothaly late ho gae.meri kae bahin naraj ho gae hy abhi mana raha hu. Apaki kothaly bhi old house ky address per gae hh. naya address to apny diya hi nahi. basy bhi- old house is a gold.
jiji naraj mat hona
Jaha chah baha rah hota hh
Sadhu bhukha bhav ka dhan ka bhukha nahi
Dhan ka bhukha jo fhir bah to sadhu nahi
jiji yah to dilo ky risty h h aadar maan ky liya to naraj mat hona-maan baadie ky gadi bhar duga. mana ky ladhu fikky kuuuu.
yah geet gawaty hi ma hajir hojaga-
geet ha
Baag mae phapiya bola
maa jani kun aya hay
aya hay maera Dharmpal vira
sara soodaa laayaa hay
maa ki teel bahin ky chundadi sang ma jhanjhad laaya hay.
per maera bichar ha ki Mansi,
Narsi ka bhatt - Nihaldy ka bhatt sun kar mana gi
yah kavi darbar sary saman chalga
bolo prem sy- bajrang bali ky jay-jay-jay-jay

shokeen123
August 15th, 2002, 12:07 AM
Dharam Pal Bhai:

Aap Mansi nai naraaz karan ka jugaad kyun karoso? Old house te mera pata sai? Pher te aap ne dp jaghan bhejni padengi!

Good poem! It's great to see the "Dharam Pal" stamp on all the geets :-)
regards

Sujata

mansi
August 15th, 2002, 04:06 AM
Dhrampal bhai
kothli kathli ti eeb bad main dekhi ja gi,pehla nun bato ka aap ki tabiyat kisi sai.jan hai to jahan hai! aap theek hoga to kothli bhi aa ja gi wa kit jawa gi. kothli nai to ana aa babyan dhora sai ar bhai kai gail aa kothli sai .kothli app bhaiyan tain pahla koni aap kothli tain pahlayan ho!
baki old is gold to eeba bhi sai par kothli to cheej aa esi sai ka bera lag ja sa jab babya nain to, un kai to roj dakiya ti dakhdai hai ghee sa ghal ja sai. par jo bera ho kay ,kis din awa gi kothli ,to dakiy ti roj "THAT'S ALL, NO MORE MAIL FOR ME" kah kah ka dukhi nahin karna pada.koya bat nahin bhai adahi(half) kohtli to app ki suthri batan main ai aa gayi baki adahi(half) jab aap thek ho jo jad bhaj diyo koya tol koni.:-)
apna khayal rkhiyo
mahri taraf tain namaste ,ram ram,subh kamnai
regards !
mansi

Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Aug 14, 2002 02:26 p.m.):
Mansi JIJI
Waday bhae ky faraj na to mma samju su per mae bimar hogaya tha esliya kothaly late ho gae.meri kae bahin naraj ho gae hy abhi mana raha hu. Apaki kothaly bhi old house ky address per gae hh. naya address to apny diya hi nahi. basy bhi- old house is a gold.
jiji naraj mat hona
Jaha chah baha rah hota hh
Sadhu bhukha bhav ka dhan ka bhukha nahi
Dhan ka bhukha jo fhir bah to sadhu nahi
jiji yah to dilo ky risty h h aadar maan ky liya to naraj mat hona-maan baadie ky gadi bhar duga. mana ky ladhu fikky kuuuu.
yah geet gawaty hi ma hajir hojaga-
geet ha
Baag mae phapiya bola
maa jani kun aya hay
aya hay maera Dharmpal vira
sara soodaa laayaa hay
maa ki teel bahin ky chundadi sang ma jhanjhad laaya hay.
per maera bichar ha ki Mansi,
Narsi ka bhatt - Nihaldy ka bhatt sun kar mana gi
yah kavi darbar sary saman chalga
bolo prem sy- bajrang bali ky jay-jay-jay-jay

mansi
August 15th, 2002, 04:23 AM
Dharmpal bhai
main to app ki bimari ka pad kai baichan si ho gi thi esai khatar nicha likha geet to pad aa nahin payi tagaja main reply kar diya ,jab post kara to dekhya kai aap nai to apni babai khatar geet bhi likh rakha sai ,bhot ghani khushi hoyi padh kai bas ankha main ansu bhar aa ya padh kai,:-( bhai bahan ka to rishta aa isa banaya sai ram nai naam landai aa ankh bhar awan sain !:-)
apna khayal rakhiyo!
wishes and regards
mansi
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Aug 14, 2002 02:26 p.m.):
Mansi JIJI
Waday bhae ky faraj na to mma samju su per mae bimar hogaya tha esliya kothaly late ho gae.meri kae bahin naraj ho gae hy abhi mana raha hu. Apaki kothaly bhi old house ky address per gae hh. naya address to apny diya hi nahi. basy bhi- old house is a gold.
jiji naraj mat hona
Jaha chah baha rah hota hh
Sadhu bhukha bhav ka dhan ka bhukha nahi
Dhan ka bhukha jo fhir bah to sadhu nahi
jiji yah to dilo ky risty h h aadar maan ky liya to naraj mat hona-maan baadie ky gadi bhar duga. mana ky ladhu fikky kuuuu.
yah geet gawaty hi ma hajir hojaga-
geet ha
Baag mae phapiya bola
maa jani kun aya hay
aya hay maera Dharmpal vira
sara soodaa laayaa hay
maa ki teel bahin ky chundadi sang ma jhanjhad laaya hay.
per maera bichar ha ki Mansi,
Narsi ka bhatt - Nihaldy ka bhatt sun kar mana gi
yah kavi darbar sary saman chalga
bolo prem sy- bajrang bali ky jay-jay-jay-jay

saurabhsaharan
August 15th, 2002, 04:27 AM
:( :( :( :( :( :(

ranjitjat
August 15th, 2002, 04:27 AM
Sujata Bahin
Thank u very much for th complements.
Jiji mae to Santa-banta ki bhasa ma telepathy sy bat kar raha tha.App santa ki bhasa ny samaj gae to 2 kothaly bhyjani padgi. aap ka address to-MY OLD HOUSE- HH na.
Aap ki teel-Kothaly ak to USA mae dhary purani
ho gae.Rakhsa bandan tak intjar ha akar laeja nahi to post karuga.
Bahin jj Jhasi ky rani ha to Bhae bhi Maharana partap sy kam nahi ha. Paran ka paka ha.
London Airport per naye teel liya hajir miloga

mansi
August 15th, 2002, 04:34 AM
THANK YOU SAURABH BHAI
I REALLY MEAN IT,BY YOU BHAI I AM NOT KIDDING:-)
Saurabh Saharan (Aug 14, 2002 06:57 p.m.):
:( :( :( :( :( :(

shokeen123
August 15th, 2002, 06:13 AM
Saurabh Saharan (Aug 14, 2002 06:57 p.m.):
:( :( :( :( :( :(

Ley bhai mai te jimman (gym gai thi, tu muh banaye baitha paya. Er pichhaey te Mansi ne Dharma Pal bhai bi apna liya!

:-( :-( :-(

What is going on? Tu theek thak te sai na?
Bhai hanuman chaalisa jaroor padh liye subh theek ho jyga!

:-)

shokeen123
August 15th, 2002, 06:22 AM
Dhram Pal bhai,

Eib tak aansun nah aaye thay, par ib nah rukken! How lucky of Mansi and me to have this honor!

Bhai meri teel London mai nahi, Delhi mai deni pedegi!

Bhai aapne Jhansi ki Rani bana kai bhot badda takma de diya! Maharana Pratap ka e dil ho sake sai itna badda! Nu te sari duniya bhari sai!

Please take care of your health, and convey regards to Bhabi...

regards,

Sujata

mansi
August 15th, 2002, 08:48 AM
SUJATA DI
LAYO AAP TO BAN GAYA JHANSI KI RANI ,CONGRATULATIONS! WHAT A COMPLIMENT WOW! WE ARE SO HAPPY FOR YOU:-)BAS ESA BAT PAI EK BAR AUR BOLON DO MANA YO ......JAI BAJRANG BALI TOD DUSHMAN KI NALI! BAT TO JAMA SAHI SA MAHRANA PARTAP BARGAY BADAY DIL KA MANAS AA KAH SAKA SAI YO TO DHRAMPAL BHAI THANKYOU FOR THIS WE ALL ARE HONOURED AS WELL WITH SUJATA DI:-)!
SUJATA DI .......(JO DO KOTHLI AWAN GI US MAIN TAIN AIK MARA DHORA BHAJ DIYO AR YA BAT BATAIYO NA KISA TI,BAS APP KAI AR MARA BECH MAIN YO SECRET RAHNA CHAHIYA!THEEK HAI! OKAY BYE NOW KADA KOYA SUN LAI MAHRA SECRET!:-))
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Aug 14, 2002 06:57 p.m.):
Sujata Bahin
Thank u very much for th complements.
Jiji mae to Santa-banta ki bhasa ma telepathy sy bat kar raha tha.App santa ki bhasa ny samaj gae to 2 kothaly bhyjani padgi. aap ka address to-MY OLD HOUSE- HH na.
Aap ki teel-Kothaly ak to USA mae dhary purani
ho gae.Rakhsa bandan tak intjar ha akar laeja nahi to post karuga.
Bahin jj Jhasi ky rani ha to Bhae bhi Maharana partap sy kam nahi ha. Paran ka paka ha.
London Airport per naye teel liya hajir miloga

bharti
August 15th, 2002, 08:06 PM
Rajesh ji , aap theek kaho the.....( chhidge JAT kavi ) .
mannay tai janu Bhirdaan ke chatte main dala maar diya sach bol kai, Dharampal ji.

bichara Raj chalya tha kavi tohan , ar yo ke ho gya?????
Amit Dahiya ki Kakroi aali kavita nai har koy bhool gya !!!!!!!!!

oh...o... chaar line tai mannay bhi likh di dekho.

ranjitjat
August 15th, 2002, 11:47 PM
Bharti ji
Kati sach bolo so app.
JAT jodi banao so aap.
Par jodi banaty samaya
1 kadawe sachae ka dhan rakhiyo ,
kadhy ya gadbad na hoja 2 line wali


Rattan katori ghee jaal
chulay jaal kasarr
Ghughat mae dulhan jaal
Jab murakh-Santa-banta ho bhartar ||||

ranjitjat
August 16th, 2002, 12:09 AM
Sujata,Mansi Bahin
App dono ny phasala kar liya bahut aacha ha.
Sujata TO JHANSI RANI BAN GAE TIRANGA JHANDA LAHARA DIYA> Abhi to India made-Delhi made KHADAR KI HI TEEL MILAYGI.
LONDON-USA WALI TEEL MANSI KY LIYA CHHOAD DY.
MANSI CHHOTY HA_ BAHUT ROE HA
! AAKHO mae 6-6 ASHU ja raehay thy
RAMRAM-Sari BAHINO KO-
TUM SABHI KHUSH RAHO
GOD BLESS YOU ALL

shokeen123
August 16th, 2002, 12:15 AM
Na Bhai (Dharam Pal)

Khaddar ki teel nah luin! Mai te London mai Harod's te ley kai aaungi!

Aap Mansi te dey diyo Khaddar ki.....

regards,

Sujata

bharti
August 16th, 2002, 11:44 AM
kis Gadbad ki baat karo so Dharmpalji???

ranjitjat
August 16th, 2002, 01:09 PM
Bharti JI
MIS-MATCH ,Jaldwaji ki Shadi- Galat jode.
YOU know your job well
This is only light advice
base on life experence
Take it lightly
u doing good job

with best wishes

mansi
August 16th, 2002, 08:39 PM
DHARMPAL BHAI AUR SUJATA DI
PHLAI TO THANKYOU KAI MERA JIKAR BHI KAR LIYA KOTHLI MAIN BAKI DIDI BDYAN KA PAHLA HAK BANA SA CHOICE KARAN KA TO JO APP NAIN THEEK LAGA WO LA LIYO MANA TO WASA BHI KHADAR JAMA A BDHIYA LAGA SAI PAR KHADAR SILK USTAIN BHI BADHIYA RAHWA GA .TO DEKH LIYO DHARMPAL BHAI YUH LAYA SAKO TO (COLOR NATURAL KHADI WOVEN) OR ANYONE YOU LIKE.JAMA BALA BALA HO JA GI PHAR TO:-)
Sujata (Aug 15, 2002 02:45 p.m.):
Na Bhai (Dharam Pal)

Khaddar ki teel nah luin! Mai te London mai Harod's te ley kai aaungi!

Aap Mansi te dey diyo Khaddar ki.....

regards,

Sujata

ranjitjat
August 17th, 2002, 01:56 AM
Sujata & MANSI BAHIN
Tum dono mind paka banalo orr 1 fasala karlo.
Sujata ny to kae bar mind change karna hh.
EESki choice bhi high top ki ha.
Mansi jiji tu apani choice pasand karly.Sujata ky INTJAR mae to kae saman CHALAY JANGY.

WITH REGARDS AND BEST WISHES

bharti
August 17th, 2002, 03:28 PM
thank you, DharmPalji ...for your advice.

shokeen123
August 18th, 2002, 03:02 AM
Dharam Pal Bhai:

Hum donu aane fasla kar liya. Mansi meri chhotti bhan sai, jo ooski marzi, le legi. Mai te bhai mazaak karoon thi! Jo aapki sardha ho de diyo.

Par munne nu laage sai, abki bar aap USA aao te hum dono aap ne Washington airport pe baithi millenghe.

regards,

Sujata

mansi
August 18th, 2002, 09:21 AM
CHALO SUJATA DI JUKAR AAP KAHO NUA THEEK SAI !:-)
DHRAMPAL BHAI EB MAHRA PHASLA TO HO GAYA HUMNAI TO KISA BAT TAIN KOYA OBJECTION KONI !JUKAR AAP THEEK SAMJHO KAR DIYO!
EEB AAP BATAO AGA ?:-)
REGARDS !
MANSI

ranjitjat
August 18th, 2002, 03:57 PM
Sujata,MANSI Bahin
London sahar sy hath jodd banchana parnam maeri BAHINA
Kisy tumhary TEEJ TOUHAR MANAY,
KISA BARSA RAM MAERI BAHINA
BAHIN BHAI KA PAYAR AMAR HO
SADA SUHAGAN KHUS RAHANA
Dharmpal ki jo galti ho usako chit per mat rakhana
SAbhi ka raksakah RAM bataya
BAHI partipal kar BAHINA

ranjitjat
August 19th, 2002, 07:57 PM
Sujata & MANSI BAHIN
AAP dono khush raho aap ki khusi mae hi maeri khushi ha.AAP ny to Majak 2 mae apani pasand-choice sabhi kuch bata diya.Bahut SAMAJDAR HO.AAP ka majak-maan-pasand-nayg-jogg sabhi seermatha manliya.Abhi to KHUSH ho jao.
D.C SY tum LONDON HEATHROW AIRPORT
per akar bathhi pa jao to sbhi ka kam ho jaya ga.Thodi si HIMAT KA HI KAM HA

WITH BEST WISHES
SEE U AT LONDON HEATHROW AIR PORT SOON>

shokeen123
August 19th, 2002, 08:21 PM
Jiji Mansi:

Tu nu kar, tu ek baar Londhan ka trip marya. Jiji meri flight te Paris te sai, er bhai ki tabiyat theek rahi te mai Delhi mai bi mil lyungi (bhanjay ke byah mai), par jiji tu ek chuckker lagaya Heathrow ka. Na te mhara bhai airport pe baat dekh kai taras jyaga!

achha jiji, yo kaam tere hawaley sai eib!

Talk to you later...

Dharam Pal Bhai,

Eib apni gojh ka andaaza laga lyo. Hum donu kharcheeli bhan ghani sain! Aap ne bera sai, Mansi ki pasand Khadi silk sai? Bhai khadi silk te sadharan silk te bi mahangi sai! Just kidding!

regards

Sujata

raj2rif
September 7th, 2002, 08:36 AM
Hi Raj, How are you?
This is Hemant, Virendra Tavathia's son. I'm also an amateur poet. If you'd like to talk about poetry, or share critiques on it, contact me at bullettoothtaz@yahoo.com. Thank you.

Hemant Tavathia.



Raj Baniwal (Aug 07, 2002 07:21 a.m.):
hey guyz,i have never ever met a romantic jat gal or guy in my life,why r v so rude?? is there any poet around,i mean amateaur,like me?? how can i send private messages to u?? wanna see my poems??two of them got me 2000 bucks in a competition!!!
raj, (doing BA(H) Hist. from DU)

amitdahiya
September 8th, 2002, 06:52 PM
Cold stone and icy wind
bear witness
How red my brother’s blood ran
Tracing on a cold mountain slope
The history of his people’s courage
Writ in blood since time began
You who would celebrate his going
You have grown nothing on your own land
There his peasant warrior’s blood grew
A Crimson flower of blood
That you might know of his noble clan

No tears for the brave warrior
Fallen so foul and so far from his own field
One day your cold mountain slopes too shall yield
Wheat and mustard and rice and cane

For after we have fertilized
Your cold slopes with our warm blood
We shall harvest our enemies
And return to adore
the crimson blood flowers
That shall grow from my brother’s blood
on your land again
and again…. and again........

Amit Dahiyabadshah
Village Kakroi
District Sonepat
Haryana
India

amitdahiya
September 8th, 2002, 07:47 PM
Bhai Saurabh
Have you ever been to a movie which you wanted to watch and instead have been forced to hear the loud conversation of some people who insist on speaking during the film. The guy who started this post was asking for poetry and instead he's got a chatline and we are all forced to overhear this stuff which would actually be quite interesting on the chat room or the Humour page but maybe this is some peoples idea of poetry.

A short poem for those who chat on the poetry page
_________________________________


Overheard some chat on the poetry page
the chatterrati thought it was a hit
But we who come here for the music of verse
think it rhymes with _ _ _ _

Amit

saurabhsaharan
September 11th, 2002, 10:23 PM
Oye baadshah!!

bhai tu kadd chhid gayaa!!!
chaalu raakh bhai apni poetry!!
arr apne kaam te kaam!!! samajh gayaa!!

pradeepsiwach
September 11th, 2002, 11:04 PM
hello every one
i came to know about this site 2 days back whan someone told me about it.i didn't believe it till i saw with my own eyes.well i would say that it is a very very small site and i would like to make it a mega site may be 2 years later when i have enough money.....moroever its members are only in india why not abroad jats who are highly successful given thi fair competition they get compared to the discrimination they face in metros of india.
i would like all the successful jats to be members of this arena and help their other fellows who are struggling and wanna make their mark in the world
any jat member wanna make friends with me is free to contact me .i am a doctor and currently frankly speaking am struggling.but i am confident that i will make it die hard jats always make it so will i
wish me good luck.

ranjitjat
September 12th, 2002, 12:49 AM
Pardeep BHAI- WELCOME & GOOD LUCK
The members of the site are all over world.
I am in London & most active members are in USA &all over

sujatadahiya
September 14th, 2002, 04:04 PM
Maaf karna bhaieyo ar behno mai is khushgavar mahol ko thoda sa sanjeeda kar rahi hu, vo kya hai ki is topic ko pad kar mere andar ka shayar jaag utha hai, to mai kuch alfazz jo mainay khud jode hai likh rahi hu ,
" Ye jeevan jeena hai , chahe kuch bhi ho jai , Har shaqsh waqt kay sanchay mai dhalta jai , chahe lakh vipattiya , chahe lakh kathinaiya aaye , jisne than lee chalne ki ,chalta jai bas chalta jai , sukh dukh to jeevan kay anubhav hai , lenay hi hai , sukh say sukhi log , dukh say dukhi to hotay hi hai , sukhi hao vo jo sukh dukh ko matr ek anubhav mane , kal kya hoga na sochay , sadkarm kare aur bas chalta jai ".

ranjitjat
September 14th, 2002, 04:51 PM
Sujata ji
Very nice & great
IIS sayar na to app jagaya rako
kuch bhi ho sonay ka nam na liyo.
Mae tt 1 line ka sayar hu
bo bhi jatuu bhasa ka
hajir hh
Ham survir kahaty usako jo karna ho so kar jaya.I
Pichhay kadam nahi hata ta chahay dhadd sy sees utar jaya II

sujatadahiya
September 14th, 2002, 08:40 PM
dharampal sing ji bohot bohot shukriya , apne bare mai kuch bataiye . kya aap army mai thay ?

ranjitjat
September 15th, 2002, 01:22 AM
Sujata JI- Thank u for information.
I was in Indian navy,
I have for 4 generations of army back ground.
There is lots about me on this site and much more in BOOK-France TO KARGIL
" line sewa mae
Janam lekar ghum liya sarasty ky kony2 mae
Bahut ghany dhukh sahan kary marany aur pada hony mae II

Jila Bhiwani TEHSIL DADRI tumny ky na bera ss
Nam Dharmpal Gaam Ghasola mae mera nami dera ss
Balakpan mae duniya daekhi London kara basayra ss
Haryana maha sabha London mae gawan ka kam maera ss

bharti
September 15th, 2002, 12:46 PM
Dudeeji...
aap insaan.............. kamaal hain
London main Jaton ki pehchaan hain
aapke shayarana andaaz ke
hum sabhi .............. kadardan hain

sujatadahiya
September 15th, 2002, 06:09 PM
thank's a lot dharampal ji , apke barey mai jaan kar bohot khushi hui .






Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Sep 14, 2002 03:52 p.m.):
Sujata JI- Thank u for information.
I was in Indian navy,
I have for 4 generations of army back ground.
There is lots about me on this site and much more in BOOK-France TO KARGIL
" line sewa mae
Janam lekar ghum liya sarasty ky kony2 mae
Bahut ghany dhukh sahan kary marany aur pada hony mae II

Jila Bhiwani TEHSIL DADRI tumny ky na bera ss
Nam Dharmpal Gaam Ghasola mae mera nami dera ss
Balakpan mae duniya daekhi London kara basayra ss
Haryana maha sabha London mae gawan ka kam maera ss

ranjitjat
September 16th, 2002, 04:10 AM
Bharti Ji &Sujata ji ------RAMRAM
Thank you for kind words & respect

Abhi to 2 line jat ki pahchan ki aur likhni padangi.

France mae 6jat ka samarak khoj ny ka record maera hh
Shaheed ko sardhanjali deny mae pahala naam maera hy
Combridge mae jhhandy gadaniya Dr Jitander baeta maera hy
Washington Eyes centre ka bhi gold medal Jitander lae raha hy
Medical vision group- aur Dudee Eyes centre lae raha hy
America- kentucky mae aak sunny cottage maera hy
Lexingtion horse centre ky pas Dudee farm lae raha hy
Jatoo ka sada ucha naam rahay yah Dharmpal ki manokamana hay !!!!!!!! ii

sujatadahiya
September 17th, 2002, 01:41 AM
bohot khoob dudee ji bohot khoob ,
dil kush kar diya apne .
jato ki tarkki dekh kar dil kush ho jata hai .
ishwar apko aur apke baccho ko bohot bohot khushiya aur pyarr de .

ranjitjat
September 18th, 2002, 10:30 PM
Sujata ji & Bharti JI aur sabhi kadar dano ko RAMRAM- Poet to bhai kisi bhasa likh sakata hh
Jaruri nahi- english ka poet ho.
Jattuu bhasa- haryanvi mae bhi kavita lika sakaty hu. Chulla gram rakho.
2 lines sewa mae hajir hh.

Dusaro ky dilo mae ghar karty hhn I
Bahi insan jindgee AMAR karatay hhn II

Konsi chijj hh jo yaha nahi milatee I
Sabhi kuch mil jata hh par MAA nahi milaltee II

ranjitjat
September 19th, 2002, 01:30 PM
Khun sy seecha tha ees gulsan ko hamany
Meray BAAG ko uujadany mae tum ko rahi kaya mila. !!!!!
MERAY ghar ko jalany mae hy RAHI tum ko kaya mila.
Yah mat bhulo ki tumara ghar bhi hai seesy ka bana.
Maeri class bhagany mae- hy rahi tum ko kaya mila
siraf baad duwa- sirf baad duwa-siraf baad duwa. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Khuda- RAM-ki rahmat barsay gi
Aur maera baag phir hara hoga. !!!!!!
Gulsan mae bahar phir ayagi
khuda- BHAGWAN bahut rahmatgar hh
tum dekhaty rahana-tum dekhaty rahana
Yahi hai Dharmpal ky Dil aur ATMA ka Kahana !!!!!!!!!

bharti
September 19th, 2002, 02:40 PM
Bhot badhiya DudeeJi.
bahut senti kar dete hain aap.

ranjitjat
September 20th, 2002, 05:21 PM
Sabhi Kadardan bhai- bhino ko RAMRAM
Sewa mae hajir hh 2 lines

IES jiwan sangharas mae tum akaly nahi ho yaro
Ies tufhan mae ham bhi tumhary sath hhn yaro
Tumhary sath jan ki baji laga denghy ham yaro
Samudar ky majdhar sy jiwan naya ko par laga daengy yaro
Khuda bada rahmatgar hh uski karamat hh yaro
Bhagato ka rakhsakh DINBHANDU BHAGWAN HH YARO.

ranjitjat
September 22nd, 2002, 04:58 PM
kadardano ki sewa mae i line hajirhh
Yah duniya hh aak sapana ry
Yaha koe mat samajho apana ry

ranjitjat
September 24th, 2002, 01:10 AM
Kadardano- ABI jagany ka samaya agaya hh

CHAL UTTHH MUSAFIR BHOR BHAEE
ABHI RAT KAHA JO SOWAT HHHHH
JO SOWATT HH SOO KHOWAT HH
JO JAGATT HH SOO PAWATT HH

ranjitjat
October 17th, 2003, 07:55 PM
Lakhmi chand surag mae ja liya
Usaka thod thikana koyana !!
Mehar singh GURU KO SAmroo-
Dharmpal- GURU- KIRAPA VIN GANA KOYANA !!!!!!!!!!!!

ranjitjat
June 11th, 2006, 02:50 AM
Kit Gaye Sary Poet.
France Ky Morche Fauji Ky Bhai Yad Jatni Aagi
Gola Gali Bombbari Mae Jat Ko Jhaal Datni Aagi

Nich Chal Tank Career Uppar Jahaj Hawai
Morche Mae Ky Gujari Nuu Sari Khool Sunai

Dusman Per Attack Kiya Jaan Maran Mae Aayi
Mudhe Pad-pad Kar Goli Mar Aagye Yad Lugai

Dharampal Dudee Ny Kargil Mae Tha Lai Kardai
Sivji Ka Barat Karu Rajikhusi Aaja Nanad Ky Bhai

ranjitjat
October 29th, 2006, 12:57 AM
This ia one of the oldest poetry
thread- still going strong
please keep it up

Jiwani diwani sada sae hoti aaye
Fauji ki kahani sunalo mery bhai

Fauji Kargil sy Jab Bapis aaya
To pher ghar per Kasa rash rachaya

Aakkho ky mae Aankh mile
Aur Hath mile hatho mae
Misari jasi Dali Gulan lagi
Jat- Jatni ki Baato mae

choudharyneelam
October 29th, 2006, 06:17 PM
Dharmpal Sir...your poetry work is awesome...i've seen this first time from your side...and nice to know about you and your family's great achievements...you all are just marvellous...proud to see our community people at that heights.

Sir keep writing....i really enjoyed this great work by you :)

Regards
Neelam

ranjitjat
November 7th, 2006, 02:04 AM
MADHUR YAD - SWEET MEMORY

Dear Neelam
Thank you very much for your kind words.
I know your village- CH. Mitar Singh and all most whole village.
I was teacher In Jhojhu before your birth.
Ch mitar singh, his son, grandson visited me in Bhiwani last year.
Here is another poem.
JHOJHU KI YAD MAE


JHOJHU SCHOOL KA VAH HAPPY TIME YAD AAYA
JAB GHASOLA KA MASTER KISI APNE KY KAM AAYA

EXAM KI DUTY MAE BAHUT SY JATO KO PASS KARVAYA
DISTRICT. MAE SABSE PAHLA PASS-PORT VAN KAR AAYA

HARMAN PYARA VAH DHARMPAL LONDON CHALA AAYA
BHARAT MATA KO PARNAM KAR SABKA DIL TOD AAYA

BHAIO KAHNE KO TO SARI DUNIYA APNI HOTI HAE
PER APNAO KI TO KUCH 2 BAT HI NIRALI HOTI HAE

1974 MAE CH. MITAR SINGH GERMANY SY LONDON AAYA
JHOJHUMARKA BRAND KING SIZE DUTY FREE KA GIFT LAYA

FIR HAMNE MID NIGHT WEST MINISTER KA CHAKAR LAGAYA
NEW YEAR PICCI-TRAFALGAR SQ PER RAGNI GAKAR MANAYA