View Full Version : Ganga Ban Gai Gandda Nala......!!!!
devdahiya
December 31st, 2004, 09:37 AM
KOI KEHTA NADI YE MERI,MERI DHARTI SE NIKLEE HAI
ISSKA PAANI BHI MERA HAI,MERI HI SAARI BIJLI HAI.
DUJJA BOLE LOHA MERA,MERI DHRA MEIN DABA PADA HAI
MERI MARZI NAHINIKALUN,MUJHSE KOI NAHI BDA HAI.
KUTTE BILLI BANE KAHDE HUM,KESSE KAUN KARE NIPTARA
KOI NAHI BATNA CHAHE,SABKO CHAHIYE SARA-SARA.
KYUN ANGREZON KI KARI GULAMI,KARAN HUMKO SAMAJH MEIN AAYA
MUGHLON KO KYUN DOSH DE RAHE,APNO NE HI DESH KO KHYA.
LOOT MACHI HAI,ANDHKAAR HAI,NETAON KO SHARAM NA AAYE
SWARTH BADA HAI APNA-APNA,INDIA CHAHE BHAD MEIN JAYE.
KOI MANDIR BANWATA HAI,KOI DE USKE TUDWAYE
ANDHEE PEESE SACHAI SE,KUTTA USKO KHATA JAYE.
KOI CHARA BIKWATA HAI,KOI NAKLI STAMP BANAYE
PAKDA JAYE CHORI KARTA,LAMBE-LAMBE DAANT DIKHAYE.
BESHARMI KA AESAA AALAM,INSA KO INSA MARWAYE
RAVAN KO GADI MEIN LAKAR,SITAON KA HARAN KARAYE.
SABKUCHCH CHAUPPAT KAR DALA HAI,AAG LAGANE KI BAARI HAI
YEH BHI JALDI HO JAEGA,BHAGWAN KYA DUNIYA DARI HAI.
UPAR WALA SOCHTA HOGA,GALTI MUJHSE KAHAN HUI HAI
JISS GANGA KO POOJNA THA,VO GANDA NALA BANI HUI HAI.
DEV
devdahiya
December 31st, 2004, 11:30 AM
dear members,
your comments will be useful to me,plz do so
Dev
dndeswal
August 14th, 2006, 11:43 PM
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I came across this thread of Dev Dahiya only today. It is a very nice poem written in pure Hindi, (not Haryanavi). I am taking the liberty of putting it in Devanagri script so that everyone may enjoy it once again, on Independence Day.
गंगा बन गई गंदा नाला
(देव दहिया)
कोई कहता नदी ये मेरी, मेरी धरती से निकली है -
इसका पानी भी मेरा है, मेरी ही सारी बिजली है ।
दूजा बोले लोहा मेरा, मेरी धरा में दबा पड़ा है -
मेरी मर्जी नहीं निकालूं, मुझसे कोई नहीं बड़ा है ।
कुत्ते-बिल्ली बने खड़े हम, कैसे कौन करे निपटारा -
कोई नहीं बांटना चाहे, सबको चाहिये सारा-सारा ।
क्यूं अंग्रेजों की करी गुलामी, कारण हमको समझ में आया -
मुगलों को क्यों दोष दे रहे, अपनों ने ही देश को खाया ।
लूट मची है, अंधकार है, नेताओं को शर्म ना आई -
स्वार्थ बड़ा है अपना-अपना, भारत चाहे भाड़ में जाये ।
कोई मंदिर बनवाता है, कोई उसको तुड़वाये -
अंधी पीसे सच्चाई से, कुत्ता उसको खाता जाये ।
कोई चारा बिकवाता है, कोई नकली स्टैम्प बनाये -
पकड़ा जाये चोरी करता, लंबे-लंबे दांत दिखाये ।
बेशर्मी का ऐसा आलम, इंसान को इंसान मरवाये -
रावण को गाड़ी में लाकर सीताओं का हरण कराये ।
सब कुछ चौपट कर डाला है, आग लगाने की बारी है -
ये भी जल्दी हो जायेगा - भगवान ! क्या दुनियादारी है !
ऊपर वाला सोचता होगा, गलती मुझसे कहां हुई है -
जिस गंगा को पूजना था, वो गंदा नाला बनी हुई है !!
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desijat
August 15th, 2006, 01:34 AM
Shabd dhundh raha hun ki kaise apne Desh ki is sachai ka hisab dun
Mein bhi kisi neta ki tarah bhashan, ya chamcho ki tarah kisi ka rubab dun
Fir socha, mujheme aur unme farak kya rahega?
Kyun na mein hi pehla kadam uthaun aur sabko karmo se jawab dun?
shamshermalik
August 15th, 2006, 02:32 AM
Shabd dhundh raha hun ki kaise apne Desh ki is sachai ka hisab dun
Mein bhi kisi neta ki tarah bhashan, ya chamcho ki tarah kisi ka rubab dun
Fir socha, mujheme aur unme farak kya rahega?
Kyun na mein hi pehla kadam uthaun aur sabko karmo se jawab dun?
Vikas you right...Its easy to point than to take corrective measures...and our leaders should learn these things.
Anyway the effort by Dev Dahiyaji is good to present the problem in poetic way as we all know it in simple poetic way but again question remains DO WE WHO POINT OUT THE PROBLEM DONOT HAVE ANY DUTY TO TRY TO FIND OUT THE SOLUTION.
No offences against anyone and I praise Dev Dahiyaji to write it in poetic way but I would also expect few lines from him what he thinks how can we solve the problem...and Dahiyaji that too in poetic way.
Regards.
Shamsher
deepakchoudhry
August 15th, 2006, 02:47 AM
Dev Bhai Sahib,
Kai Baar Samajh nahin aata ki kya kahoon, Desh ki halat dekh khar.
Per shayaad isme main bhagwaan ki koi marzi hogi.
Per itna sab dekh kar phir bhi "Optimist" toh hona hi padegaa, we have no choice but to be positive and look forward.
Agar app Ithaas dekhain toh Kavi aur Sahityakaar hamaray desh ki shaan rahe hain...they are one class which were and are above corruption and have performed their duties with utmost dedication.
Pls keep up the good work and keep writing.
Deepak
deepakchoudhry
August 15th, 2006, 02:50 AM
Vikas you right...Its easy to point than to take corrective measures...and our leaders should learn these things.
Anyway the effort by Dev Dahiyaji is good to present the problem in poetic way as we all know it in simple poetic way but again question remains DO WE WHO POINT OUT THE PROBLEM DONOT HAVE ANY DUTY TO TRY TO FIND OUT THE SOLUTION.
No offences against anyone and I praise Dev Dahiyaji to write it in poetic way but I would also expect few lines from him what he thinks how can we solve the problem...and Dahiyaji that too in poetic way.
Regards.
Shamsher
The first step is acknowledgement that there is a problem and only then we can move forward.
Bimari Ka pata lagaay bina Illaaj nahin ho sakta.
shamshermalik
August 15th, 2006, 02:55 AM
The first step is acknowledgement that there is a problem and only then we can move forward.
Bimari Ka pata lagaay bina Illaaj nahin ho sakta.
Yes you are right and Dahiyaji is a good poet and can suggest us some solutions that can motivate many of us...I am not criticising Dahiyaji but I think it looks like that.. In the first line I have pointed out the leaders.I am urging Dahiyaji to come with a peom suggesting solution...Am I wrong in that?? May Be???
deepakchoudhry
August 15th, 2006, 02:35 PM
I'm just taking part in the discussion...it was just a comment.
I know what you meant, so dont take it personally.