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  1. #41
    ek hamari taraf se bhi... wrote it 21 years back.....
    .................................................. ............

    Mili na wo mujhe, subah huee thee aaj bhi
    dikhi na wo mujhe, khidki khuli thee aaj bhi

    nikalte the wo ban sanwar kar, hawa me zulfen udaate
    udee nahi hain zulfen, hawa chali thee aaj bhi.............. 1

    mujhe dekhte hi wo, kar leti thee band khidki
    khulee rahi aaj khadki, maine dekha udhar thaa aaj bhi......2

    hothon me pallu daba leti thee wo, hume hansta dekhkar
    aaisa kuch bhi nahi huaa doston, hanse the hum aaj bhi......3

    manati thee wo mujhe, mere naraj hone par
    manaya nahi hai aaj, naraj hue the hum aaj bhi................4

    uski gudiya se mere gudde ki roj hote thee sagayee ki baaten,
    huee nahi aaj wo baaten, gudda gudiya the yahan aaj bhi.....5

    .................................................. ...................................

    RK^2

  2. #42

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    Quote Originally Posted by rkumar View Post
    ek hamari taraf se bhi... wrote it 21 years back.....
    .................................................. ............

    Mili na wo mujhe, subah huee thee aaj bhi
    dikhi na wo mujhe, khidki khuli thee aaj bhi

    nikalte the wo ban sanwar kar, hawa me zulfen udaate
    udee nahi hain zulfen, hawa chali thee aaj bhi.............. 1

    mujhe dekhte hi wo, kar leti thee band khidki
    khulee rahi aaj khadki, maine dekha udhar thaa aaj bhi......2

    hothon me pallu daba leti thee wo, hume hansta dekhkar
    aaisa kuch bhi nahi huaa doston, hanse the hum aaj bhi......3

    manati thee wo mujhe, mere naraj hone par
    manaya nahi hai aaj, naraj hue the hum aaj bhi................4

    uski gudiya se mere gudde ki roj hote thee sagayee ki baaten,
    huee nahi aaj wo baaten, gudda gudiya the yahan aaj bhi.....5

    .................................................. ...................................

    RK^2
    Namaste Sir Ji...

    Wah Sir...aapne to sabhi ko peeche chhod diya.

    Apki shayri ke aage to baake sab pheeke se pad gaye...

    We hope, it will continue Sir.

    ThankYou Sir
    FIGHT FOR A BRIGHTER INDIA

  3. #43

    Thumbs up

    Quote Originally Posted by neels View Post
    Okay Rahul ye aapne likha tha, i alws kept thinking that these are DDLJ's song "na jane mere dil ko kya ho gya" lines ...
    Mam bilkul sahi pehchana aapne...it means aapne bhi DDLJ kai baar dekhi hai...

    ...actually DDLJ jab ban rahi thi tab uska Director aaya tha humare paas...bola SirJi kuchh 2-4 line likh do...but mere pas time ki kum tha..

    Maine pahle to mana kar diya tha.. but baad me usne bataya ki Shahrukh aur Kajol hain is movie me...

    ...Phir mera dil Pighal gaya...

    Bas maine 2-4 lines likh di... Free me..

    aur aapne to dekha hi hoga kitni hit hui movie phir...

    Humaara to dil hi kuchh aisa hai...
    FIGHT FOR A BRIGHTER INDIA

  4. #44
    Quote Originally Posted by crsnadar View Post
    Humaara to dil hi kuchh aisa hai...
    Hamara to dil hi kuch aisa hai
    Bas unki ek muskaan pe pighal jata hai
    Wo kya jane ki unki chahat mein
    Jarra-jarra bhi aaftaab hua jata hai.
    Keep Believing in Yourself and Your Dreams

  5. #45

    Exclamation entered twice

    posted twice, some browsing problem!
    Last edited by shweta123; January 11th, 2008 at 01:18 PM.

  6. #46

    Exclamation ye abhi likhi hain maine .......

    Aaj fir bahaaro me wohi rang sa bhara hai;aaj fir hai hawa me wohi baat ................aaj fir dharti muskura rahi hai khul ke ;aaj fir amber hai geet gungunaata sa.............aaj fir dhundhti hai unko nazar usi tarah ;Aaj fir wo mera naam chand pe likh aaye hai shayad.............

  7. #47

    well written shweta jee..bahut khub

    Quote Originally Posted by shwetadhaka View Post
    Aaj fir bahaaro me wohi rang sa bhara hai;aaj fir hai hawa me wohi baat ................aaj fir dharti muskura rahi hai khul ke ;aaj fir amber hai geet gungunaata sa.............aaj fir dhundhti hai unko nazar usi tarah ;Aaj fir wo mera naam chand pe likh aaye hai shayad.............


    Jaane Aaj phir Aasmaan kyun roya hai..,
    Naakaam Aashiqon ki haar mein ek aur moti piroya hai,
    Koi to bataaye kahan mera mehboob khoya hai,
    Mohabbat ke Kuffun mein mera yeh pyaar soya hai...!!


  8. #48
    Quote Originally Posted by rkumar View Post
    ek hamari taraf se bhi... wrote it 21 years back.....
    .................................................. ............

    Mili na wo mujhe, subah huee thee aaj bhi
    dikhi na wo mujhe, khidki khuli thee aaj bhi
    .................................................. ...................................

    RK^2
    Sir jee bahut acsha likha hai appne..tabiyat khush ho gayi ye padh kar..

  9. #49

    Dil darta hai dil ki baaton se

    Ji bhar aata hai jab jazbaaton se
    Yaad aata hai un mulaqaaton se
    Ye pal kahin ruk na jaaye yahi par
    Dil dar sa jaata hai dil ki baaton se
    FIGHT FOR A BRIGHTER INDIA

  10. #50
    Quote Originally Posted by coolengineer View Post
    Jaane Aaj phir Aasmaan kyun roya hai..,

    Naakaam Aashiqon ki haar mein ek aur moti piroya hai,
    Koi to bataaye kahan mera mehboob khoya hai,
    Mohabbat ke Kuffun mein mera yeh pyaar soya hai...!!

    aachhhaaa reee laalla................
    Become more and more innocent, less knowledgeable and more childlike. Take life as fun - because that's precisely what it is!

  11. #51
    Quote Originally Posted by crsnadar View Post
    Mam bilkul sahi pehchana aapne...it means aapne bhi DDLJ kai baar dekhi hai...

    ...actually DDLJ jab ban rahi thi tab uska Director aaya tha humare paas...bola SirJi kuchh 2-4 line likh do...but mere pas time ki kum tha..

    Maine pahle to mana kar diya tha.. but baad me usne bataya ki Shahrukh aur Kajol hain is movie me...

    ...Phir mera dil Pighal gaya...

    Bas maine 2-4 lines likh di... Free me..

    aur aapne to dekha hi hoga kitni hit hui movie phir...

    Humaara to dil hi kuchh aisa hai...
    jee haan DDLJ kai baar dekhi hai... aur gane to na jane kitni hi baar sune hain...actually this song and these lines of the song have been my favs. so can't miss them.... Happy to know that yu write so gud...

    The last line of urs here..."Hamara to dil hi kuch aisa hai"...reminded me of a friend, he alws used to say,, kya karen, hamara to dil hi kuchh aisa hai. perhaps he used to speak tht in the line of Amitabh bachchan's flavour from Sholay,,, you also inspired from tht or just aise hi....!
    Keep Believing in Yourself and Your Dreams

  12. #52
    Quote Originally Posted by crsnadar View Post
    Ji bhar aata hai jab jazbaaton se
    Yaad aata hai un mulaqaaton se
    Ye pal kahin ruk na jaaye yahi par
    Dil dar sa jaata hai dil ki baaton se
    Guddd....

    Ek pal hai zindagi...
    Ek pal gujre nahin....
    Keep Believing in Yourself and Your Dreams

  13. #53

    Smile Karke dekho kabhi...

    Har pal hai zindgi mudkar dekho kabhi
    Nahi guzrenge ye pal rokdo inko yahi
    Tham jaayega har manzar yahi par
    Zindgi jine ki koshish karke to dekho kabhi
    FIGHT FOR A BRIGHTER INDIA

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