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August 19th, 2017, 05:27 PM
#1
A poem
chidiya rani badi sayani
upar udti karti manmani
daal-daal par basera karti
dhoond lati wo dana-pani
tinka jod ghonsla banati
chidey sang karti nadani
bacche puchhe udey hum kaise
chaunch maar bana deti swabhimani
kya udd pata wo chhota panchhi
unchai uski dekh ke hum karte hairani
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August 19th, 2017, 05:38 PM
#2
main gagan mein udta panchhi tha
jaise jharnon mein boond ho
mamta may anchal ka tara tha
ek din duwidha ne gher liye
na chhu paya uss gagan ko
ek pinjre mein yun kaid hua
patka uss gaud ne batla ke keechad
aur asmaan ne bhi jhangjod diya
mamta may anchal jab rang badalta hai
dekh asmaan ne bhi khud ko dhak liya
main gagan mein udta panchhi tha
aisa kah fir khud ko azad kiya
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August 28th, 2017, 06:05 PM
#3
Attachment 19715 POODIE
I am a poodie in the house,
To do my duty all around.
I threatened every little mouse,
Asked cattie not to make sound.
I gave comfort enough to drowse,
Slept when night whistle found.
I made children to browse,
How I feel when you chase around.
I am a poodie, treated just like a human sound.
I jump on you, to call me poodie;
As I am the only one in the house.
How did you find my Poodie? give comment or like
Last edited by neel6318; September 3rd, 2017 at 11:54 AM.
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September 3rd, 2017, 11:55 AM
#4
Originally Posted by
neel6318
Administrator/moderators please tell me why my Poodie image is not being reflected in post.....y?
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September 10th, 2017, 08:05 PM
#5
Attachment 19765Thankyou Rajpal ji for liking my Poodie. Here is her photo which moderators equivalent to my all bhaiyas were not able to make me upload to get the smile. I did it!
She is the only one who can take away my isolation even if I do not visit Jatland webpage. In this photo, I celebrated my 36th birth anniversary to make her feel good and be around. You can also say, a bribe to her
Last edited by neel6318; September 11th, 2017 at 11:49 AM.
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September 11th, 2017, 11:57 AM
#6
Jab mein chhota baccha tha
Main bahaut shararat karta tha
Kapde to bahaut the fir bhi
Mogli ban ghuma karta tha
Uniform pahan cycle tez chalata tha
Aur fir cycle sang keechad mein gir jata tha
Ghar wapas aata chhutti ka bahana le
Lekin uniform badal fir school ko jata tha
Sports mein to lagan nahi thi
Saathiyon ko khel nirale dikhata tha
Teacher se school mein gana seekh
Ghar mein Dau bhaiya ka shor machata tha
Naunvi-daswin ki puchho mat
Likhne ko register naya nahi paata tha
Parents ko complaint karein kya
Ank to sunder-sunahre lata tha
Ab main jab bada ho gaya
To badi shararat karta huu
Mummy paas bulati hain, aur
Main ladki pasand nahin karta hun
Ab apni selfie bhej, ladki ko invite karo
Bin shabdon ke hi mummy ko samjhata hun
This one is for my brother, who restrict me to come around when he is with his college scholars but here at Jatland he cannot restrict me. So I tried very few lines to describe him. Though, his friends are also very naughty , not all but few.
Last edited by neel6318; September 11th, 2017 at 12:00 PM.
Reason: text error
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September 12th, 2017, 10:30 AM
#7
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September 12th, 2017, 10:42 PM
#8
Originally Posted by
Ramlaljat
कविता के साधुवाद
Sirf Thanks dena mujhe kam laga as per Jatland idea......I want to add my grin as well ...... hehehe
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September 23rd, 2017, 10:51 AM
#9
Ek aur kavita doston
Ik din shikshakon ne mujhe Master banaya
maine bhi khud ko chalk-board ki aur ghumaya
bacchon ne li chupke se photo
mud dekha to ek kutta aur keval chaar vidhyarthi ko paya
jama ke apna raub professor ka, bola
koi apatti nahi, jo balak kaksha mein nahi unne mera itihaas dauhraya
ye tha mera parichay doston
sahpathiyon ne bhi khoob majaak banaya
One of the demonstration session during college days of sibling.
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September 28th, 2017, 10:31 PM
#10
dhanyawaad Navdeep ji and a very Happy Birthday to You! Bless you prosperous and past 99 life!
ek aur Kavita,
aaj main mausi banne aayi hun
sau chuhe khaye bin Haj ki daud laga aayi hun
kitabon mein jhooth likha tha
aaj budhe bacchon ko batlati hun
muhaware chhedo to ye batlaungi
dwesh ka zariya, fir bhi main billi ban jaati hun
mausi bolo ya little girl, ab to
main hi paath padhane aayi hun
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October 1st, 2017, 01:49 PM
#11
My camel
this is my Mamaji's camel. Now, I stopped loving Poodie anymore as I don't want to fight with my elder sister because its her possession. Only in her absence, it was mine too make me sleep with comfort. Now, camel would do the same job .
People change parties for nation, I change my toy pet for sleep.
An incident: Once I played as Manmohan Singh ji during office recreation session at IBM and I was fired with questions like,
Manmohanji, these days public is talking about your affair with Soniya. What do you say? and few more
I replied anguishly, "No this media is making false news and I strongly love my beautiful Sardarni wife and only daughter. She is very intelligent. Soniya is no more in power, so I also left her company. But, serving as Prime Minister was a great experience in my life apart from my services at various Government designations in India.Attachment 19819 .......hehehe.......that was an act from chit pick randomly, and I really felt relief that atleast the team liked it. When, my act was over everybody laughed at my innocense as Manmohanji saying that I love my wife and daughter only. Very scared of falling in love with Soniya ji...........All other team actors played well and it was a great stress buster for us by our trainer and that too on serious note of acts. Otherwise, punished to be played again.
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March 11th, 2019, 01:56 PM
#12
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