kavita ki kuch panktiyan

[justadorethem]

Hi All,
Found these lines interesting , thought to share with u all.
enjoy,
sachin

aaj yah deevar , pardon ki tarah hilne lagi,
shart lekin thi ki ye buniyaad hilni chahiye|

har sadak par, har gali mein, har nagar, har gaanv mein,
haath lahrate hue har laash chalni chahiye|

sirf hangama khada karna mera maksad nahin,
saari koshish hai ki ye surat badalni chahiye|

mere seene mein nahin to tere seene mein sahi,
ho kahin bhi aag , lekin aag jalni chahiye|

[singh1981]

greeeeeeaaaaaaaattttttttt.........

[devdahiya]

Hi All,
Found these lines interesting , thought to share with u all.
enjoy,
sachin

aaj yah deevar , pardon ki tarah hilne lagi,
shart lekin thi ki ye buniyaad hilni chahiye|

har sadak par, har gali mein, har nagar, har gaanv mein,
haath lahrate hue har laash chalni chahiye|

sirf hangama khada karna mera maksad nahin,
saari koshish hai ki ye surat badalni chahiye|

mere seene mein nahin to tere seene mein sahi,
ho kahin bhi aag , lekin aag jalni chahiye|

GREAT LINES INDDED....here is a rejoinder;


Sirf aag jala kar chhodna bhi mei nahi huun chahta
AAG bhi lambe samay tak rehni dhadhakti chahiye|

Har janam mei veer yodha...iss aag par chalte rahein
Balidaan ke kisse hamessa, Itihass mei hone chahiyen|

[pammusangwan]

In Itihass K panno ko zamana palteyga ye sara
main nahin chahata ye balidaan panno main simat jaaye
In balidaano se sikh kar ek naya hi itihaas hum rachaye

don`t know how I wrote these lines......(dis is my first time if any thing not suitable)
CHEERS

GREAT LINES INDDED....here is a rejoinder;


Sirf aag jala kar chhodna bhi mei nahi huun chahta
AAG bhi lambe samay tak rehni dhadhakti chahiye|

Har janam mei veer yodha...iss aag par chalte rahein
Balidaan ke kisse hamessa, Itihass mei hone chahiyen|

[positivelook]

Very well written ! Very good lines. Pammu good effort !

Abhimanyu Phougat

[kamal123]

Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

[divyakadyan]

[quote=justadorethem;24665]Hi All,
Found these lines interesting , thought to share with u all.
enjoy,
sachin

aaj yah deevar , pardon ki tarah hilne lagi,
shart lekin thi ki ye buniyaad hilni chahiye|

har sadak par, har gali mein, har nagar, har gaanv mein,
haath lahrate hue har laash chalni chahiye|

sirf hangama khada karna mera maksad nahin,
saari koshish hai ki ye surat badalni chahiye|

mere seene mein nahin to tere seene mein sahi,
ho kahin bhi aag , lekin aag jalni chahiye|[/q

Dumdar

[choudharyneelam]

Very well written Sachin and Dev Sir ...and Pammu brother you too have tried it nicely...keep trying