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    The Old House....

    Raj:

    Here is the true description of life in the US in the form of poetry....

    The old house

    The other day, as I drove past my old house
    a nostalgia of the yesteryears flooded my mind
    With my little girl, not-so-little now,
    I cherished the moments
    When she was little,
    the corridors echoed with her sweet crooning
    and the household bustled with multiple activities
    Then as now, the autumn arrived
    As bright red and yellow leaves fell to the ground
    saying so-long…with a subtle hint in the air
    that winter was somewhere just around the corner
    Haunted Halloweens, pumpkin patches
    Diwali greetings and Thanksgiving feastings
    Christmas Carols and the Easter baskets
    The weekend games and the neighborhood yard sales
    the daily rush of life, with yearnings of back home
    From here to there and there to here
    The warmth it contained made it home sweet home

    Out in the front lawn the perennials appeared
    year after year just as the nature would have them appear
    The unrelenting stubborn patch of crabgrass
    the maple tree, the bluebirds, butterflies and the orioles
    blooms of multi colors, danced in harmony
    as if to welcome the spring’s bounty
    dainty white, pink and purple azaleas
    The lavenders, the roses, the irises and the lilies
    The daffodils, tulips and honeysuckle strands
    The dawns filled with hope
    and the dusks with anticipation
    It always felt like home sweet home

    It was where my little one leaped to life
    It was where I realized the deeper meaning of life
    Of love and endurance, of eternal bliss
    Of the real, the ordinary and falsehood abound
    Shades of people and emotions alike
    The cul-de-sac beamed with energy
    of the tiny tots and adults alike
    I remembered the deck
    we had so enjoyed with dear friends
    Sometimes pale from the hot summer sun
    Other times laden with harsh winter snow
    The children’s swing set in the backyard
    And my stint, that one-year as a vegetable grower,
    Mustard, tomatoes, peppers and greens
    in the hope to cure my nostalgia so evergreen

    The house was dimly lit as the sun had traveled around
    windows open, as cool breeze blew around
    Just as always there were sights and sounds,
    as new and old still clung around
    A bright red, white and blue-stripped flag now stood in the ground
    But the saris on the cloth line were no where to be found
    There was the dogwood that always bloomed last
    But the swing set so lonely
    awaited its occupants from the past
    Almost everything seemed the same
    Except it wasn’t our home anymore…

    Sujata

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    Sujata di
    simply terrific and marvelous one!no words to describe and appreciate it, just beyond fantastic and great one,keep it up and let some more come of this kind!:-)

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    Its so touchy..... a wonderful piece of thoughts n emotions.....

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    Thanks Mansi and Seema...

    Its very encouraging!

    Sujata

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    Sujata ji,
    Very nice ! I admire the way you let your thoughts flow in your writings - poems and others too. Thanks for sharing !

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    Thank you jiji Anu!

    Par munne thoda sa dukh nu sai uk entry bhot kam aaye...Yo Saurabh nu te lagya rah sai hanuman chaalisa mai :-D par jiji ki kavita pe ek haraf bi nah likhya!

    cheers!

    Sujata

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    Sujata di
    aap kun chinta karo so likh dai ga bhai ata ho ga kam tain parmoshan ho kai kam bhi to parmot ho gaya ho ga daftar alan nain socha aak parmoshan kar kai dekh lewan Saurabh bhai ka kai bera usai tain kimai kam karna sharu kar dai to ! :-)quote]Sujata (Aug 14, 2002 09:32 a.m.):
    Thank you jiji Anu!

    Par munne thoda sa dukh nu sai uk entry bhot kam aaye...Yo Saurabh nu te lagya rah sai hanuman chaalisa mai :-D par jiji ki kavita pe ek haraf bi nah likhya!

    cheers!

    Sujata[/quote]

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    Sujata ji,

    Aapaki shaayaree or poem dono hi kamaal ki hoti hain bas ase hi likhiti raho aap.

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    Bhai Ashok,

    Yo kavita kum, er amricca ka rona dhona jyada sai. Haade ka akelapan kati khaa jya sai! Kit gaam ki dulandhi, er kit haloween! Jib haloween pe baalak candy lane aanwe mera te sir ghoom jya sai! Poori ki poori super market ki candy kharidan ke baad bhi, kai kai te raat ke gyara (11PM) bjey aaya karen. Bhai haar ke pichhley saal munne akhir ek notice taang diya: "Candies will be offered from 8-10 PM!"
    Par haade ke baalak ke kum sain? de mar de mar, darwaja tod diya....:-D

    Bhai himmat bandhaney ka bhot shukriya!

    Sujata

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    Ram-ram bua,

    apne to kamal kar diya, mane to nu laga ke apne hanumaan chalisa padan ke bad hi yo kavita likhi hai, tabhi to itni badhiya aur gahari likhi gayi.

    This is a wonderful peom , i appreciate ur thoughts & way of expressing these in a great way. Really u r very talented a great combination of intelligence and beauty.
    proud to be a Jat.

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    Jiji Naveena

    Bhot dhanyavaad! Jiji Kavi te haade kai sain, par bahar likad ke nah aate. Ib mai koshish karoongi saaryaan ne lyawaan ki :-)

    Thanks!

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    jiji ram ram!!

    maaf karnaa reply karan me deri ho gayi, parr ke karun mere mote dimaag me kavita muskil se hi badaa karen,,arr waa bhi angrezi kavita,,arr usme me bhi bhaari bharkam shabd,,manne toh dictionary kholni padi baar baar,,ibb jaise "orioles","azaleas","crabgrass",,,yo mere paale konya pade,,shabdon ke context se toh kuch kheti baari se sambandhit lage se parr jib lo asal meaning na bera pade, mazaa sa naa aata

    parrr ibb maalum padya se toh jiji kamaal karr diyaa aapne,,ke kavita rachi se,,ji saa aa gaya!!!!!

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    Bhai Saurabh:

    Munne pur bera tha, west coast te 3 ghantey baad jawaab aawega! Te bhai ib tu aagya, ib yo make-shift chatline shuru howegi!

    Haan te bhai yo azalea ki nu baat sai uk west coast mai sardi e nah padti? Azalea te sirf jit baraf pade hood e hon sain!

    Bhai doosra haraf "Orioles" munne udhara le liya, mahre sahar mai Orioles ki baseball team sai....!

    Teesari baat bhai "Crabgrass" haade weed nai kahan sain!

    :-)

    Sujata

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    Sujata Bahin nice peace of poetry
    English ky sath chalagi to nahi 2 line likh raha hu
    Bundaly har bolo ky mukh hamny suni kahani ha
    Khub ladi mardani bah to Jhansi bali rani ha
    Nana,Taya, SAHA BHADUR chamky kae sitary ha.
    Bharat mata unko payary ha bah mata ky payary hh
    Tirangy jhhanday ki bhi yahi aak kahani ha
    THE OLD HOUSE ny bhi dohraee yahi kahani ha
    good job keep it up
    with best wishes & regards

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    That was an excellent poem. It made me see a

    personality with contrast. Some years back i heard someone say that human beings have two faces ( at least)- one for the world to see and one for their own self! Poems sometimes bare the face for self, to the world- and that is a very vulnerable situation. I admire your courage to share your delicate

    emotions.

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    Dear Urmila:

    It is especially rewarding and encouraging to have your acknowledgement. Thanks!

    Sujata

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    Buaji merai to aaj haath laagi sai ya kavita...kati gajab dhaa rakhya sai.....

    a rare piece of perfect emotions blended in the form of a masterpiece poem.....

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    buaji this is simply excellent!!!
    jaat ke thaath

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    manne te aaj bera patya

    Sujata jiji yo te gajab ka discription tha. I loved it. You are a poet too. Good stuff jiji.
    "LIFE TEACHES EVERY ONE IN A NATURAL WAY.NO ONE CAN ESCAPE THIS REALITY"

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    Wow!! I didn't know that... that was nice poem, post more poems Sujataji.

    -Vinod
    It may be that universal history is the history of the different intonations given to a handful of metaphors. -J L Borges

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